"(Translation) 不禽不獸"의 두 판 사이의 차이
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*Discussion Questions: | *Discussion Questions: | ||
− | + How would we render Fenghuang? (Fenghuang bird? Phoenix?) How about Qilin?<br /> | + | + How would we render Fenghuang? (Fenghuang bird? Phoenix?) How about Qilin?<br /><br /> |
+ | (JG) I thought it was a great choice that you were consistent - if Qilin, then also Feng Huang. I would only maybe say fenghuang and qilin, together and now capitals, cause each is one word and it indicates a kind of creature. I would also add footnotes describing briefly what these creatures are. | ||
− | + For 壽, wouldn't it be better to say "banquet/celebration for its long life"? | + | + For 壽, wouldn't it be better to say "banquet/celebration for its long life"?<br /> |
+ | (JG) I agree, I think we translated it something like that in class too. | ||
[[Category:2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop]] | [[Category:2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop]] | ||
[[Category:Intermediate Training Group]] | [[Category:Intermediate Training Group]] |
2018년 7월 9일 (월) 21:14 판
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Translator(s) | Participants of 2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop (Intermediate Training Group) | |
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Year | 2018 |
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Student translation : (Althea Volpe)
The Feng Huang lived so long that every bird went to the court to congratulate him and only the bat didn't show up. The Feng, blaming it, said: "You are inferior to me so how can you be so arrogant?" The bat replied: "I have feet so I belong to the beasts' race, why should I congratulate you?" One day it was the Qi Lin birthday and the bat didn't show up again. Also the Qi Lin blamed the bat. The bat replied: "I have wings so I belong to the birds' race, what should I congratulate for?" The Feng Huang and the Qi Lin gathered and talked about the bat's matter and, complaining for the indignation they both felt, said: "Now in an evil and ungenerous world, there is even a crowd of neither bird nor beast that moves from place to place and there is really nothing you can do about it."
- Discussion Questions:
+ How would we render Fenghuang? (Fenghuang bird? Phoenix?) How about Qilin?
(JG) I thought it was a great choice that you were consistent - if Qilin, then also Feng Huang. I would only maybe say fenghuang and qilin, together and now capitals, cause each is one word and it indicates a kind of creature. I would also add footnotes describing briefly what these creatures are.
+ For 壽, wouldn't it be better to say "banquet/celebration for its long life"?
(JG) I agree, I think we translated it something like that in class too.