"2018 推句 05 - 10"의 두 판 사이의 차이

2018년 7월 5일 (목) 21:11 판 (원본 보기) Kyrie (토론 | 기여) (→‎Poem 5 : (Kyrie)) ← 이전 편집		2018년 7월 20일 (금) 21:41 기준 최신판 (원본 보기) Kyrie (토론 | 기여) (→‎Poem 5 : (Write your name))
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42번째 줄:		42번째 줄:
−	==='''(sample) : Young Kyun Oh'''===	+	==='''Poem 5 : (Kyrie)'''===
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		+	Spring water fills all pools <ref> The literal translation is "fills four pools," but I understood that to refer to the four directions and by extension all pools. </ref>
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		+	Summer clouds are many marvelous mountain peaks.
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		+	Autumn moon scatters brilliant splendor
		+	Winter mountain ridges distinguish lonely pines.
	*Discussion Questions:		*Discussion Questions:
		+	+To what does the 多 refer to? Are there many summer clouds or are the mountain peaks made by the clouds many? If the former, how can it be expressed in the translation?
−		+	==='''Poem 7 : (Okyang)'''===
−	==='''Poem 5 : (Kyrie)'''===
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−	Spring water, fills all <ref>The literal translation is "four ponds," but I understood this to refer to the four directions and, by extension, all ponds.</ref> ponds,	+	The moon becomes the candle of the universe,
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−	Summer clouds, many wondrous mountain peaks.
−	Autumn moon, raises bright splendor,	+	The wind makes the mountains and rivers a drum.
−	Winter mountain ridge, distinguishes the lonely pine.<ref> This is the first stanza of Tao Yuanming's poem ''Four Seasons''.</ref>	+	The moon becomes a fan without handle
−	*Discussion Questions:
−	+I tried to maintain the sense of a poem by separating  the topic of the line (ie/ summer clouds) from the description with  commas. Is this too fragmented? Would it be preferable to the readers if I connected the two clauses? (ie/ Summer clouds are many wondrous mountain peaks)
−	==='''Poem 7 : (Write your name)'''===	+	The stars look like beads scattered from a severed tassel.
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	==='''Poem 9 : (Ewa)'''===		==='''Poem 9 : (Ewa)'''===
73번째 줄:		73번째 줄:
	Humanness, righteousness, propriety, wisdom and trust.		Humanness, righteousness, propriety, wisdom and trust.
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2018년 7월 20일 (금) 21:41 기준 최신판

Original Script

Translation

Poem 5 : (Kyrie)

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Spring water fills all pools ^[1]

Summer clouds are many marvelous mountain peaks.

Autumn moon scatters brilliant splendor

Winter mountain ridges distinguish lonely pines.

• Discussion Questions:

+To what does the 多 refer to? Are there many summer clouds or are the mountain peaks made by the clouds many? If the former, how can it be expressed in the translation?

Poem 7 : (Okyang)

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The moon becomes the candle of the universe,

The wind makes the mountains and rivers a drum.

The moon becomes a fan without handle

The stars look like beads scattered from a severed tassel.

• Discussion Questions:

Poem 9 : (Ewa)

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Spring is the head [the first] of four seasons

Human beings are the soul of the myriad of things.

Water, fire, wood, metal and earth

Humanness, righteousness, propriety, wisdom and trust.

• Discussion Questions:

↑ The literal translation is "fills four pools," but I understood that to refer to the four directions and by extension all pools.