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2019년 1월 16일 (수) 12:41에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2019-01-16T12:41:27Z

Lyndsey: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-09T01:50:16Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 홍연재 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 홍연○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-09T01:49:47Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 홍연재 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 홍연○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

Honglucky7: /* the history of ganghwa dolmen */

2019-01-08T14:18:49Z

‎the history of ganghwa dolmen

Honglucky7: /* the history of ganghwa dolmen */

2019-01-08T14:18:07Z

‎the history of ganghwa dolmen

Honglucky7: /* the history of ganghwa dolmen */

2019-01-08T14:17:45Z

‎the history of ganghwa dolmen

Honglucky7: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-08T14:14:11Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Honglucky7: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2019-01-08T14:11:59Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Lyndsey: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

2018-12-29T02:02:34Z

‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 4 홍연재 문서를 GGHS 홍연재 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018-12-28T10:53:22Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 4 홍연재 문서를 GGHS 홍연재 문서로 옮겼습니다

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 {{GGHS학생
 |사진 =
-|이름 =
+|학번 = 1424
-|영문 =
+|위키아이디= Honglucky7
-|학번 =
-|팀번호 =
 |위키아이디=
 }}
 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==

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 }}
 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
-<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
+<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 2]]'''''</center>
 ===the history of ganghwa dolmen===
 In fact, I had a lot of thoughts before I applied for the camp.

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 ===the history of ganghwa dolmen===
 In fact, I had a lot of thoughts before I applied for the camp.
 It takes a lot of time and effort and most of all, I had to attend school during the vacation.
 However, based on the experience that I gained confidence in my career through the global camp in the first semester, I applied to learn about new fields by challenging a new topic.
 Among many themes, the theme I chose is 'Strengthening Dolmen and Prehistory.'
 The reason I chose this among many topics is because I thought that studying this topic would give me more detailed knowledge about the history of dolmen and Ganghwa, and I would take pride in the history of Ganghwa as a student attending Ganghwa Girls' High School.
 This winter vacation camp was like a Santa Claus who brought me presents.
 It is because it has given me so much learning. The most learned thing from this camp was the history of Ganghwa.
 I did not have much knowledge about dolmen, but while working on the dolmen, we learned a lot of detailed knowledge such as the use, shape, and size of dolmen.
 So I knew all about the dolmen and told others.
 Another thing I learned is how to communicate with foreigners.
 When I was talking to a foreigner, I couldn't convey what I wanted to say properly, but this opportunity gave me the courage to talk to my foreign teachers first, even if my English pronunciation was not good.
 It was also more meaningful to be able to correct English expressions that we misused in our daily lives while talking to foreign teachers.
 My most essential role in the team was to create a dolmen and play the chief role in the play-style presentation.
 Although it was difficult in the process to make the dolmen feel real, it was able to produce good results by working with friends around it.
 Also, I received a lot of feedback from my foreign teacher about the play tone and intonation in order to create the character of the chief, and I was able to get good results from it.
 Through this camp, I hope that I have the courage to be more proactive and communicate fluently in my conversations with foreigners.
 Also, I hope to learn how to express my opinions in group activities with unfamiliar people and become a persuasive communicator in a larger community in the future.

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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
 ===the history of ganghwa dolmen===
- In fact, I had a lot of thoughts before I applied for the camp.
+In fact, I had a lot of thoughts before I applied for the camp.
 It takes a lot of time and effort and most of all, I had to attend school during the vacation.
 However, based on the experience that I gained confidence in my career through the global camp in the first semester, I applied to learn about new fields by challenging a new topic.
- Among many themes, the theme I chose is 'Strengthening Dolmen and Prehistory.'
+Among many themes, the theme I chose is 'Strengthening Dolmen and Prehistory.'
 The reason I chose this among many topics is because I thought that studying this topic would give me more detailed knowledge about the history of dolmen and Ganghwa, and I would take pride in the history of Ganghwa as a student attending Ganghwa Girls' High School.
- This winter vacation camp was like a Santa Claus who brought me presents.
+This winter vacation camp was like a Santa Claus who brought me presents.
 It is because it has given me so much learning. The most learned thing from this camp was the history of Ganghwa.
 I did not have much knowledge about dolmen, but while working on the dolmen, we learned a lot of detailed knowledge such as the use, shape, and size of dolmen.
 So I knew all about the dolmen and told others.
- Another thing I learned is how to communicate with foreigners.
+Another thing I learned is how to communicate with foreigners.
 When I was talking to a foreigner, I couldn't convey what I wanted to say properly, but this opportunity gave me the courage to talk to my foreign teachers first, even if my English pronunciation was not good.
 It was also more meaningful to be able to correct English expressions that we misused in our daily lives while talking to foreign teachers.
- My most essential role in the team was to create a dolmen and play the chief role in the play-style presentation.
+My most essential role in the team was to create a dolmen and play the chief role in the play-style presentation.
 Although it was difficult in the process to make the dolmen feel real, it was able to produce good results by working with friends around it.
 Also, I received a lot of feedback from my foreign teacher about the play tone and intonation in order to create the character of the chief, and I was able to get good results from it.
- Through this camp, I hope that I have the courage to be more proactive and communicate fluently in my conversations with foreigners.
+Through this camp, I hope that I have the courage to be more proactive and communicate fluently in my conversations with foreigners.
 Also, I hope to learn how to express my opinions in group activities with unfamiliar people and become a persuasive communicator in a larger community in the future.

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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
 ===the history of ganghwa dolmen===
-  In fact, I had a lot of thoughts before I applied for the camp. It takes a lot of time and effort and most of all, I had to attend school during the vacation. However, based on the experience that I gained confidence in my career through the global camp in the first semester, I applied to learn about new fields by challenging a new topic.
+  In fact, I had a lot of thoughts before I applied for the camp.
-  Among many themes, the theme I chose is 'Strengthening Dolmen and Prehistory.' The reason I chose this among many topics is because I thought that studying this topic would give me more detailed knowledge about the history of dolmen and Ganghwa, and I would take pride in the history of Ganghwa as a student attending Ganghwa Girls' High School.
+  Among many themes, the theme I chose is 'Strengthening Dolmen and Prehistory.'
-  This winter vacation camp was like a Santa Claus who brought me presents. It is because it has given me so much learning. The most learned thing from this camp was the history of Ganghwa. I did not have much knowledge about dolmen, but while working on the dolmen, we learned a lot of detailed knowledge such as the use, shape, and size of dol. so I knew all about the dolmen and told others.
+  This winter vacation camp was like a Santa Claus who brought me presents.
-  Another thing I learned is how to communicate with foreigners. When I was talking to a foreigner, I couldn't convey what I wanted to say properly, but this opportunity gave me the courage to talk to my foreign teachers first, even if my English pronunciation was not good. It was also more meaningful to be able to correct English expressions that we misused in our daily lives while talking to foreign teachers.
+  Another thing I learned is how to communicate with foreigners.
-  My most essential role in the team was to create a dolmen and play the chief role in the play-style presentation. Although it was difficult in the process to make the dolmen feel real, it was able to produce good results by working with friends around it. Also, I received a lot of feedback from my foreign teacher about the play tone and intonation in order to create the character of the chief, and I was able to get good results from it.
+  My most essential role in the team was to create a dolmen and play the chief role in the play-style presentation.
-  Through this camp, I hope that I have the courage to be more proactive and communicate fluently in my conversations with foreigners. Also, I hope to learn how to express my opinions in group activities with unfamiliar people and become a persuasive communicator in a larger community in the future.
+  Through this camp, I hope that I have the courage to be more proactive and communicate fluently in my conversations with foreigners.
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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		+	\|사진 =
		+	\|이름 =
		+	\|영문 =
		+	\|학번 =
		+	\|팀번호 =
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	==2019 Winter Personal Essay==		==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
		+	<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
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	==2018 Summer Personal Essay==		==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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