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2019년 1월 16일 (수) 13:14에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2019-01-16T13:14:00Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 이다빈 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 이다○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-11T02:12:51Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 이다빈 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 이다○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019년 1월 9일 (수) 08:03에 대한 5-이다빈의 편집

2019-01-09T08:03:39Z

2018년 12월 29일 (토) 02:08에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2018-12-29T02:08:04Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 4 이다빈 문서를 GGHS 이다빈 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018-12-28T10:48:01Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 4 이다빈 문서를 GGHS 이다빈 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018년 12월 28일 (금) 10:43에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2018-12-28T10:43:57Z

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2018-07-26T11:14:29Z

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2018-07-26T11:14:17Z

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2018-07-26T09:19:49Z

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2018-07-26T09:19:03Z

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 {{GGHS학생
 |사진 =
-|이름 =
+|학번 = 1318
-|영문 =
+|위키아이디= 5-이다○
-|학번 =
-|팀번호 =
 |위키아이디=
 }}
 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
-<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
+<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 5]]'''''</center>

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 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
-Put your essay content here.
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

← 이전 판		2018년 12월 29일 (토) 02:08 판
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		+	\|사진 =
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		+	\|학번 =
		+	\|팀번호 =
		+	\|위키아이디=
		+	}}
	==2019 Winter Personal Essay==		==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
		+	<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
		+
		+	Put your essay content here.

	==2018 Summer Personal Essay==		==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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-=About Me=
+==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
-(Write something here about you if you want.)
-=Essay=
+==2018 Summer Personal Essay==
 When I heard that global camp opens during this summer vacation, I applied right away. The reason was because  I wanted to develop my  poor English skills into activities with native English teachers and I thought it was a special and good opportunity to connect my career with Goryeo. This global camp had a variety of fields. I chose society field because my dream is to become a human rights lawyer, so I chose the field of society to expand my knowledge of the society in the history of Goryeo and discover the cases of human rights abuses within it.

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 When I heard that global camp opens during this summer vacation, I applied right away. The reason was because  I wanted to develop my  poor English skills into activities with native English teachers and I thought it was a special and good opportunity to connect my career with Goryeo. This global camp had a variety of fields. I chose society field because my dream is to become a human rights lawyer, so I chose the field of society to expand my knowledge of the society in the history of Goryeo and discover the cases of human rights abuses within it.
-When we first chose society, the theme was women's rights. I did not choose the subject of women's rights because I had already studied about it and knew it well enough to explain to others.I like learning and knowing new things, so I have chosen the topic 'the difference in quality between the lives of the people  and the military people during the period of the military rule'. I have learned about the period of the military rule in Korean history class. While studying for the test, I wondered how difficult was life for the people and I wanted to learn more about the topic. Luckily, it was good to find imformation and to know the contents about this topic at this global camp.
+When we first chose society, the theme was women's rights. I did not choose the subject of women's rights because I had already studied about it and knew it well enough to explain to others.I like learning and knowing new things, so I have chosen the topic 'the difference in quality between the lives of the people  and the military people during the period of the military rule'. I have learned about the period of the military rule in Korean history class. While studying for the test, I wondered how difficult was life for the people and I wanted to learn more about the topic. Luckily, it was good to find information and to know the contents about this topic at this global camp.
 I was in charge of the life of the military people during Choe U's reign and the life of Ganghwa Island people and the mainland people. History was written around the lives of the ruling class, so it was difficult to find the data, but I was able to find the data by searching 'our history net', research paper, and other sites. After that, based on the data I found, I analyzed how and what human rights were violated. After researching and analyzing the data, I thought the lives of the people are similar to today due to the corruption of the military. As you can see from the days of the military rule, it is the weak whose rights are being violated by those who are more powerful.

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 =Essay=
-When I heard that global camp opens during this summer vacation, I applied right away.
+When I heard that global camp opens during this summer vacation, I applied right away. The reason was because  I wanted to develop my  poor English skills into activities with native English teachers and I thought it was a special and good opportunity to connect my career with Goryeo. This global camp had a variety of fields. I chose society field because my dream is to become a human rights lawyer, so I chose the field of society to expand my knowledge of the society in the history of Goryeo and discover the cases of human rights abuses within it.
-Because  I wanted to develop my  poor English skills into activities with native English teachers and I thought it was a special and good opportunity to connect my career with Goryeo.
-This global camp had a variety of fields. I chose society field.
+When we first chose society, the theme was women's rights. I did not choose the subject of women's rights because I had already studied about it and knew it well enough to explain to others.I like learning and knowing new things, so I have chosen the topic 'the difference in quality between the lives of the people  and the military people during the period of the military rule'. I have learned about the period of the military rule in Korean history class. While studying for the test, I wondered how difficult was life for the people and I wanted to learn more about the topic. Luckily, it was good to find imformation and to know the contents about this topic at this global camp.
-Because my dream is to become a human rights lawyer, so I chose the field of society to expand my knowledge of the society in the history of Goryeo and discover the cases of human rights abuses within it.
-When we first chose society, the theme was women's rights.
+I was in charge of the life of the military people during Choe U's reign and the life of Ganghwa Island people and the mainland people. History was written around the lives of the ruling class, so it was difficult to find the data, but I was able to find the data by searching 'our history net', research paper, and other sites. After that, based on the data I found, I analyzed how and what human rights were violated. After researching and analyzing the data, I thought the lives of the people are similar to today due to the corruption of the military. As you can see from the days of the military rule, it is the weak whose rights are being violated by those who are more powerful.
-I did not choose the subject of women's rights because I already studied in the club and knew it well enough to explain to others.
-I like learning and knowing new things, so I have chosen subject ' the difference in quality between the lives of the people  and the military rule during the period of the military rule.
+I once again pledged to protect the human rights of these weak and to be on the side of the weak. Then I shared the presentation orders and ideas with my team and wrote the beginning of the script. And the fact that I have to write in English to the humanities information wiki was very confusing, but it was possible to translate into English with the help of my friends and teachers.
 I have learned about the period of the military rule in Korean history class.
-While studying for the test, I thought, “How difficult was life for the people?” and wanted to learn more about the topic.
+Writing this essay in English also helped me to grow my confidence in English. Through this camp, I can that I will overcome my fear of English and learn more about human rights in a broader way. I am grateful for this camp, which has greatly helped my growth, and can say that it is a choice that I never regret.In the next English camp, I will come back with much improved English skills.
-Luckily, It was good to find imformations and to know the contents about this topic at this global camp.
-I did the life of the military rule during Choi Woo's reign and life of Ganghwa Island and the People of mainland.
-History was written around the lives of the ruling class, so it was difficult to find the data, but I can able to find the data by searching ‘our history net’, research paper, and other sites.
-After that, Based on the data I found, I analyzed what  human rights were violated.
-After researching and analyzing the data, I thought the lives of the people due to the corruption of the military rule are similar to today.
-As you can see from the days of the military rule, there are the weak who  are being violated humun rights by the strong.
 I once again pledged to protect the human rights of these weak and to be on the side of the weak.
 Then I shared the presentation orders and ideas with my team and wrote the beginning of the script.
 And the fact that I have to write in English to the humanities information wiki was very confusing, but it was possible to translate into English with the help of my friends and teachers.
 Writing this essay in English also helped me to grow my confidence in English.
 Through this camp, I can that I will overcome my fear of English and learn more about human rights in a broader way.
 I am grateful for this camp, which has greatly helped my growth, and can say that it is a choice that I never regret.
 In the next English camp, I will come back with much improved English skills.
 =My Contribution=