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2019-01-11T02:20:50Z

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Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 9 Yoo Su Jeong 문서를 GGHS 유수정 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018-12-28T10:39:09Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 9 Yoo Su Jeong 문서를 GGHS 유수정 문서로 옮겼습니다

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2018-12-28T10:29:48Z

2018년 7월 26일 (목) 07:06에 대한 9유수정의 편집

2018-07-26T07:06:14Z

9유수정: 새 문서: I also participated in a global camp last year. At that time, I participated in the topic of culture. I talked with foreigners, wrote essays, made presentations, and did some fun and...

2018-07-26T06:40:01Z

새 문서: I also participated in a global camp last year. At that time, I participated in the topic of culture. I talked with foreigners, wrote essays, made presentations, and did some fun and...

새 문서

I also participated in a global camp last year. At that time, I participated in the topic of culture. I talked with foreigners, wrote essays, made presentations, and did some fun and meaningful activities, but unfortunately, I came in fourth place so i joined again this time.

I didn't get much chance to know about Korean history in school class. However, the school bought and sold goods to celebrate 1,100 years of Goryeo and reenacted Byeongnando. I knew that Byeongnando was a port of trade during the Goryeo Dynasty, but I wanted to know more about it because I was not aware of it. Also, it would be nice to know about the history of Goryeo Dynasty from various fields when friends make presentations at the global camp. I am now looking forward to gaining a lot of knowledge.

I knew about management of the Gaeseong merchant in Goryeo Dynasty, what they export and import and advantage of location at Byeongnando. I collected the information needed for presentation, translated the information and prepared it for presentation. Since I prepared hard, I hope my presentation will be completed well.

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
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 I have attended camp last summer and this summer. Participating in the camp i did not get nice performance. However, I was able to gain a lot of information from participating in the camp. Also, the topic is related with history so i learned a lot about a historical fact. This was my last chance to join this camp, so I participated because I wanted to get good results with my team members and teacher, sally.

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+I have attended camp last summer and this summer. Participating in the camp i did not get nice performance. However, I was able to gain a lot of information from participating in the camp. Also, the topic is related with history so i learned a lot about a historical fact. This was my last chance to join this camp, so I participated because I wanted to get good results with my team members and teacher, sally.
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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	I also participated in a global camp last year. At that time, I participated in the topic of culture. There were many themes then, too. There are always a variety of topics for choosing global camps based on dreams or interests. I talked with foreigners, wrote essays, made presentations, and did some fun and meaningful activities, but unfortunately, I came in fourth place so i joined again this time.		I also participated in a global camp last year. At that time, I participated in the topic of culture. There were many themes then, too. There are always a variety of topics for choosing global camps based on dreams or interests. I talked with foreigners, wrote essays, made presentations, and did some fun and meaningful activities, but unfortunately, I came in fourth place so i joined again this time.

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-I also participated in a global camp last year. At that time, I participated in the topic of culture. I talked with foreigners, wrote essays, made presentations, and did some fun and meaningful activities, but unfortunately, I came in fourth place so i  joined again this time.
+I didn't get much chance to know about Korean history in school class. However, the school bought and sold goods to celebrate 1,100 years of Goryeo and reenacted Byeongnando. I knew that Byeongnando was a port of trade during the Goryeo Dynasty, but I wanted to know more about it because I was not aware of it. So, I chose this topic. Also, it would be nice to know about the history of Goryeo Dynasty from various fields when friends make presentations at the  global camp. I am now looking forward to gaining a lot of knowledge.
-I didn't get much chance to know about Korean history in school class. However, the school bought and sold goods to celebrate 1,100 years of Goryeo and reenacted Byeongnando. I knew that Byeongnando was a port of trade during the Goryeo Dynasty, but I wanted to know more about it because I was not aware of it. Also, it would be nice to know about the history of Goryeo Dynasty from various fields when friends make presentations at the  global camp. I am now looking forward to gaining a lot of knowledge.
+I knew about management of the Gaeseong merchant in Goryeo Dynasty, what they export and import and advantage of location at Byeongnando. Even during the Goryeo Dynasty, i think it was amazing to exchange many goods with various countries. To be more specific, Byeongnando is located in the lower Yeseong River in Hwanghae Province as an international trade port in East Asia during the Goryeo period. Furthermore, the opening of the port as an international port added to the importance of Byeongnando.
-I knew about management of the Gaeseong merchant in Goryeo Dynasty, what they export and import and advantage of location at Byeongnando. I collected the information needed for presentation, translated the information and prepared it for presentation. Since I prepared hard, I hope my presentation will be completed well.
+I collected the information needed for presentation, translated the information and prepared it for presentation. Since I prepared hard, I hope my presentation will be completed well. By the time you become a third grader in high school, you can not participate in these activities because it is time to concentrate more on studying. I am sorry about this. It would be nice if more people join the global camp in the future.

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