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Sohtks: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

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‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Sohtks: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

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‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

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Sohtks: /* Great Experiences in 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp: */

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‎Great Experiences in 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp:

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Sohtks: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

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‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

Sohtks: /* My contribution in 2019 winter forum camp: */

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‎My contribution in 2019 winter forum camp:

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Sohtks: /* My contribution in 2019 winter forum camp: */

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‎My contribution in 2019 winter forum camp:

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+|사진 = GGHS 오서연.jpeg
-|이름 = 오서연|
+|학번 = 1525
-|영문 = Seoyeon Oh|
+|위키아이디= Sohtks
-|학번 = 1525|
-|팀번호 = 7|
-|위키아이디= Sohtks|
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-<center>'''★★★★★ 10''' '''''“Global Forum Camp More Valuable and Happy to Work Hard!”''''' - Seoyeon Oh, 1st grader of GGHS</center>
+<center>'''★★★★★ 10''' '''''“Global Forum Camp More Valuable and Happy to Work Hard!”''''' - Seo○ Oh, 1st grader of GGHS</center>
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 ===Great Experiences in 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp:===
 '''Glad to be with Foreign Teacher'''<br/>
 In 2018 Summer Global Forum Camp, honestly, my team had no talk with foreign teacher. I was so disappointed at the camp and the attitude of my team. At the beginning of 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp, I worried about the frequency of talking with foreign teacher. My team was assigned to Mariana, and the more we had a camp, the more we talked about lots of things, and we became real friends. While I was at the camp with Mariana and my passionate team, I understood the phrase 'Time flies'. It’s too short time to make this amount of work and talk with tender, lovely teacher. Next time, I want to spend more time to participate in the Global Forum Camp, and I want to participate in this team and the organization of teacher Mariana.

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 When Kakaotalk chatting room was created, my team was discussed about the topic which needed to be divided. That’s why we selected the topic, ‘Renewable Energy and Environmental Protection’. At the fist day of the camp, we had to talk about the way of presentation, and I suggest that we should make a play like ‘Pokémon Go’. So my team made a papar for submitting Wiki, a script for playing ‘Ganghwayeo Go’, and the stuff of what we need in the play. I usually gave some ideas of playing and decorations of the stuff, and write a script for playing. Especially, I used to focus on specific things such as pokémon changed into endangered animals, pokéstop changed into generator of renewable energy.
-[[File:Tidal barrage energy.png|thumbnail|left|Tidal barrage energy is one of renewable energy.]]
+[[File:Tidal barrage energy.png|thumbnail|Tidal barrage energy is one of renewable energy.]]
-I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I felt comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. <br/>The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves. <br/> The time I researched and studied about the discipline of renewable energy, I’m so honored to be in team 7 to contribute to the environmental protection. Because of working hard with enthusiastic teammates, we won first place in the presentation!
+I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I felt comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. <br/>The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves. <br/> The time I researched and studied about the discipline of renewable energy, I’m so honored to be in adorable, lovely, and passionate team 7 to contribute to the environmental protection. Because of working hard with enthusiastic teammates, we won first place in the presentation!
 ===Great Experiences in 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp:===
-[[File:With_Mariana.jpeg|thumbnail|Team 7 and Ms.Mariana]]
+[[File:With_Mariana.jpeg|thumbnail|left|Team 7 and Ms.Mariana]]
 '''Glad to be with Foreign Teacher'''<br/>
 In 2018 Summer Global Forum Camp, honestly, my team had no talk with foreign teacher. I was so disappointed at the camp and the attitude of my team. At the beginning of 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp, I worried about the frequency of talking with foreign teacher. My team was assigned to Mariana, and the more we had a camp, the more we talked about lots of things, and we became real friends. While I was at the camp with Mariana and my passionate team, I understood the phrase 'Time flies'. It’s too short time to make this amount of work and talk with tender, lovely teacher. Next time, I want to spend more time to participate in the Global Forum Camp, and I want to participate in this team and the organization of teacher Mariana.

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
-<center>'''“Global Forum Camp More Valuable and Happy to Work Hard”'''</center>
 <br/>
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 [[File:Tidal barrage energy.png|thumbnail|left|Tidal barrage energy is one of renewable energy.]]
-I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I felt comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves. <br/> The time I researched and studied about the discipline of renewable energy, I’m so honored to be in team 7 to contribute to the environmental protection. Because of working hard with enthusiastic teammates, we won first place in the presentation!
+I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I felt comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. <br/>The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves. <br/> The time I researched and studied about the discipline of renewable energy, I’m so honored to be in team 7 to contribute to the environmental protection. Because of working hard with enthusiastic teammates, we won first place in the presentation!
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 '''The Growth of a Global Talent'''<br/>
-Through the camp, I was able to improve my English skills and become more proficient in conversation with foreigners. I made my own website and map through Wiki and tried to keep up with the fourth Industrial Revolution. I hope that there will be plenty of opportunities for us to develop our global talents in the future. I’ll participate in the next Global Forum Camp again.
+Through the camp, I was able to improve my English skills and become more proficient in conversation with foreigners. Personally, I have low confident to talk in English. Because some of my friends teasing me a lot, were used to mimick my accent and pronunciation. Through the camp, I had a chance to overcome the trauma, and now I become more better to talk in English aloud. My team and I made own Wiki page, Google Map Dots, and Mind Map through Wiki and tried to keep up with the fourth Industrial Revolution, which always mentioned by career teacher in the school. I hope that there will be plenty of opportunities for us to develop our global talents in the future. I’ll participate in the next Global Forum Camp again.
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
 <center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 7]]'''''</center>
 ===Reasons to be here:===

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 ===Great Experiences in 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp:===
 [[File:With_Mariana.jpeg|thumbnail|Team 7 and Ms.Mariana]]
-'''Glad to be with foreign teacher'''<br/>
+'''Glad to be with Foreign Teacher'''<br/>
 In 2018 Summer Global Forum Camp, honestly, my team had no talk with foreign teacher. I was so disappointed at the camp and the attitude of my team. At the beginning of 2019 Winter Global Forum Camp, I worried about the frequency of talking with foreign teacher. My team was assigned to Mariana, and the more we had a camp, the more we talked about lots of things, and we became real friends. While I was at the camp with Mariana and my passionate team, I understood the phrase 'Time flies'. It’s too short time to make this amount of work and talk with tender, lovely teacher. Next time, I want to spend more time to participate in the Global Forum Camp, and I want to participate in this team and the organization of teacher Mariana.

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-===My contribution in 2019 winter forum camp:===
+===My Contribution in 2019 Winter Forum Camp:===
-<br/>
 '''Participate in the camp as MC in the opening ceremony'''<br/>
 Before the camp begins with teamwork, I was involuntarily chosen the opening ceremony MC by teachers. I was startled because I did not even thought of leading the camp holding in a huge scale. I was grateful to be MC, took lots of effort to write the script of the opening ceremony and to practice all day long. However, this is my first time to heading tremendous event of school, unfortunately, I made some mistakes. If I can be selected as the MC who leads the forum camp next time, I will make up for that mistakes and do better certainly.
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 [[File:Tidal barrage energy.png|thumbnail|left|Tidal barrage energy is one of renewable energy.]]
-I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I feel comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves. The time I researched and studied about the discipline of renewable energy, I’m so honored to be in team 7 to contribute to the environmental protection. Because of working hard with enthusiastic teammates, we won first place in the presentation!
+I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I felt comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves. <br/> The time I researched and studied about the discipline of renewable energy, I’m so honored to be in team 7 to contribute to the environmental protection. Because of working hard with enthusiastic teammates, we won first place in the presentation!
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==

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	When Kakaotalk chatting room was created, my team was discussed about the topic which needed to be divided. That’s why we selected the topic, ‘Renewable Energy and Environmental Protection’. At the fist day of the camp, we had to talk about the way of presentation, and I suggest that we should make a play like ‘Pokémon Go’. So my team made a papar for submitting Wiki, a script for playing ‘Ganghwayeo Go’, and the stuff of what we need in the play. I usually gave some ideas of playing and decorations of the stuff, and write a script for playing. Especially, I used to focus on specific things such as pokémon changed into endangered animals, pokéstop changed into generator of renewable energy.		When Kakaotalk chatting room was created, my team was discussed about the topic which needed to be divided. That’s why we selected the topic, ‘Renewable Energy and Environmental Protection’. At the fist day of the camp, we had to talk about the way of presentation, and I suggest that we should make a play like ‘Pokémon Go’. So my team made a papar for submitting Wiki, a script for playing ‘Ganghwayeo Go’, and the stuff of what we need in the play. I usually gave some ideas of playing and decorations of the stuff, and write a script for playing. Especially, I used to focus on specific things such as pokémon changed into endangered animals, pokéstop changed into generator of renewable energy.

		+	[[File:Tidal barrage energy.png\|thumbnail\|Tidal barrage energy is one of renewable energy.]]
	I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I feel comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves.		I wrote the part of tidal barrage energy for Wiki. I feel comfortable to write about it because I’ve already known some information of renewable energy. The principle of tidal barrage generation, the part of my research, is generally to turn the generator by closing the floodgate and then opening the door, using the force of water spilling. The fall is usually less than 10m, smaller than the fall from the hydraulic power. There are only a limited number of countries that have tidal resources because the tidal difference is only available in large areas with large capacity reserves.