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2019-01-22T10:47:31Z

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2019-01-09T04:12:36Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 4 심재희 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 심재○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-09T04:08:48Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 4 심재희 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 심재○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

4-Anca: /* Essay */

2018-07-26T11:49:33Z

‎Essay

4-심재희: /* King Wonjong */

2018-07-26T11:36:20Z

‎King Wonjong

4-심재희: /* If we were king Chungnyeol... */

2018-07-26T11:35:28Z

‎If we were king Chungnyeol...

4-심재희: /* King Wonjong */

2018-07-26T11:34:12Z

‎King Wonjong

4-Anca: /* About Me */

2018-07-26T11:29:44Z

‎About Me

4-심재희: /* About Me */

2018-07-26T11:28:07Z

‎About Me

4-심재희: /* About Me */

2018-07-26T11:25:13Z

‎About Me

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		+	==2018 Personal essay==
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 =Essay=
-I get to know Koica, an international relief organization, after reading the book, “Build their Dreams in a unfamiliar Land.” As a result, I felt regretful about the lives of poor people and wanted to contribute to their lives by reading various books related to rescue. The year 2018 marks the 1100th anniversary of the founding of the Goryeo Dynasty, and many events are being held to celebrate. Goryeo was well equipped with systems and policies related to social welfare as representative of King Taejo's Policies for stabilizing the people's livelihoods. Prior to applying for this camp, I had already gained general knowledge because I wrote thesis and participated in various events related to the social welfare policies of Goryeo. Nevertheless, I joined the camp because it was a ' global ' camp. Although there was an aim to improve my English skills through communication with foreigners, I was amazed that foreigners knew about the history of Korea. And it is hard to think of creative perspectives and directions on this issue as the nation's students learn history as an obligatory test subject. However, because foreigners learn our history incidentally, I wondered and wanted to discuss our historical events together. The reason I picked this subject was because it was related to the welfare, however, I want to talk about social welfare in our history through this camp because foreigners learn our country history only general course of events and it is hard to know interesting contents hidden in history. My role in the group was to study data about the period of military regime, one of the most impoverished lives of the people of Goryeo. The investigation focused on the lives and welfare policies of the people during this period, referring to the history of Goryeo and 高麗史節要(고려사절요)  . We also prepared video clips as well as ppt to effectively deliver the presentation. Through this camp, I was able to discuss various ideas and perspectives of different groups on a topic just as people thought differently about something, although I did not satisfy all my purposes of participation. I had dreamed of becoming a social worker since I was in the first grade in high school and worked in a volunteer club to get closer to that dream. During the past year, he visited various organizations and organizations to help the underprivileged and thought that he achieved results. However, it was regrettable to see their fundamental problems not solved, though they were rewarding as they continued temporary. At the same time, it is important to get temporary help, but I thought it would be helpful to solve the fundamental problems. As the saying goes, "The greatest tragedy for mankind lies in not learning any lessons from past history, " I thought that a policy reform based on the lives of the people who have been ravaged by the exploitation of the ruling class of the past is necessary. Also responsible for most of the reasons for the poor in many underdeveloped countries around the world is corruption in the ruling class. Because of their self-righteous behavior, someone is starving at this moment and someone may work hard in the strong sunlight when I study in the air conditioner at school. Students are the future leaders of the nation, but it is sad that children from underdeveloped countries do not even have time to think about their dreams due to poverty. It is not an easy problem to save the poor, but I think the problem of hunger can be solved if the world focuses on it and reduces corruption among the ruling class. Just as humans can not imagine what we have not experienced, premature behavior can be harmful in situations where information is scarce. The two years that the Korea International Cooperation Agency sent to underdeveloped countries, I will experience the reality more deeply and will be more practical for those who suffer from poverty. My motto: The best preparation for tomorrow is doing your best today.
+I got to know Koica, an international rescue organization, after reading the book, “Build their Dreams in an Unfamiliar Land.” As a result, I felt regretful about the lives of poor people and wanted to contribute to their lives by reading various books related to rescue. The year 2018 marks the 1100th anniversary of the founding of the Goryeo Dynasty, and many events are being held to celebrate. Goryeo was well equipped with systems and policies related to social welfare as representative of King Taejo's Policies for stabilizing the people's livelihoods. Prior to applying for this camp, I had already gained general knowledge because I wrote papers and participated in various events related to the social welfare policies of Goryeo.
 =My Contribution (together with [http://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php/2018_GGHS_4_%EA%B9%80%ED%95%B4%EC%9D%B8 김해인])=

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 ===King Wonjong===
-Wonjong broke down the military regime by implementing systematic policies such as installing an Directorate General of Resettlement(出排都監) in Kaegyeong to prepare for returning to the capital. In 1263, Goryeo intended to stabilize the people's livelihood by asking the Japanese government to crack down on pirates invading Goryeo. And Goryeo sent Taeja to Mongolia to express sincerity in its efforts to establish diplomatic relations.
+Wonjong broke down the military regime by implementing systematic policies such as installing a 出排都監(Chulbae togam) in Kaegyeong to prepare for returning to the capital. In 1263, Goryeo intended to stabilize the people's livelihood by asking the Japanese government to crack down on pirates invading Goryeo. And Goryeo sent Taeja to Mongolia to express sincerity in its efforts to establish diplomatic relations.
 ===King Chung-ryul===

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 First, the tax that was collected at that time was collected without considering the situation of the people. To solve this problem, we need to understand the situation of the people through the systematic and long-term land survey project and regulate the luxurious life of the nobles by law. And we have to create a system that will help people's lives by saving wasted taxes. Policies that take into account the situation of the people may have the effect of reducing their tax burden.
-Second, in 1233, many people died because an insect got into the middle of a person's belly and sucked blood. In addition, there were many diseases and injuries besides these pests, but there were no suitable institutions to treat them. So, the 구제도감, which was a temporary institution that King Yejong had put in place during his reign, is re-installed to ensure the people's relief and health. However, at the time of installation, it was installed only in the Kaegyeong, making it difficult for the whole country local residents to use it. In order to improve this, 구제도감 was set up all over the country and the people were expected to use it seamlessly.
+Second, in 1233, many people died because an insect got into the middle of a person's belly and sucked blood. In addition, there were many diseases and injuries besides these pests, but there were no suitable institutions to treat them. So, the 救濟都監(Gukje togam), which was a temporary institution that King Yejong had put in place during his reign, is re-installed to ensure the people's relief and health. However, at the time of installation, it was installed only in the Kaegyeong, making it difficult for the whole country local residents to use it. In order to improve this, 救濟都監(Gukje togam) was set up all over the country and the people were expected to use it seamlessly.
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