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2019년 1월 9일 (수) 03:37에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2019-01-09T03:37:42Z

2019년 1월 9일 (수) 03:33에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집

2019-01-09T03:33:52Z

Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 1 Hyoeun Kim 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 김효○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-09T03:31:03Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 1 Hyoeun Kim 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 김효○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2018년 7월 26일 (목) 06:17에 대한 Rlagydms의 편집

2018-07-26T06:17:02Z

2018년 7월 26일 (목) 06:15에 대한 Rlagydms의 편집

2018-07-26T06:15:20Z

Rlagydms: 새 문서: The reason why I joined global camp is I usually find English difficult, but I wanted to have confidence in English through this global camp and help my engineering field, Jinro by ex...

2018-07-26T05:31:35Z

새 문서: The reason why I joined global camp is I usually find English difficult, but I wanted to have confidence in English through this global camp and help my engineering field, Jinro by ex...

새 문서

The reason why I joined global camp is I usually find English difficult, but I wanted to have confidence in English through this global camp and help my engineering field, Jinro by exploring about technology. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, I hope to improve my English skills and develop confidence in English. I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology. I choose because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, we also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search. My role in the team is to research about metal types in Germany and make an announcement about metal types in Germany. Through global camp, I can get interested in English and have confidence in my presentation. By working with the team, I was able to develop a sense of community and cooperation. Also I learned more about the technology of the Goryeo Dynasty and it seems to have helped my career.

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 ==2018 Personal Essay==
 I usually found English difficult, that’s why I wanted to get confidence in it, at the same time exploring engineering field and technology. That is the reason I decided to join global camp. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology.
 I choose this topic because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. Before joining this camp I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types which was used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. During global camp I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, I also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search.

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		+	==2018 Personal Essay==
	I usually found English difficult, that’s why I wanted to get confidence in it, at the same time exploring engineering field and technology. That is the reason I decided to join global camp. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology.		I usually found English difficult, that’s why I wanted to get confidence in it, at the same time exploring engineering field and technology. That is the reason I decided to join global camp. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology.
	I choose this topic because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. Before joining this camp I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types which was used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. During global camp I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, I also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search.		I choose this topic because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. Before joining this camp I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types which was used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. During global camp I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, I also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search.

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 I usually found English difficult, that’s why I wanted to get confidence in it, at the same time exploring engineering field and technology. That is the reason I decided to join global camp. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology.
- I choose this topic because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. Before joining this camp I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types which was used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. During global camp I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, I also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search.
+I choose this topic because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. Before joining this camp I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types which was used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. During global camp I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, I also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search.
 My role in the team is to research about metal types in Germany and make an announcement about metal types in Germany.
 Through global camp, I can get interested in English and have confidence in my presentation. By working with the team, I was able to develop a sense of community and cooperation.
 In future I want to become an architect so, as I learned more about the technology of the Goryeo Dynasty during this camp looks like it will help me to achieve my goal.

← 이전 판		2018년 7월 26일 (목) 06:15 판
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−	~~The reason why I joined global camp is~~ I usually ~~find~~ English difficult, ~~but~~ I wanted to ~~have~~ confidence in ~~English through this global camp and help my~~ engineering field~~, Jinro by exploring about~~ technology. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, ~~I hope to improve my English skills and develop confidence in English.~~ I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology. I choose because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, we also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search. My role in the team is to research about metal types in Germany and make an announcement about metal types in Germany. Through global camp, I can get interested in English and have confidence in my presentation. By working with the team, I was able to develop a sense of community and cooperation. ~~Also~~ I learned more about the technology of the Goryeo Dynasty ~~and~~ it ~~seems~~ to ~~have helped~~ my ~~career~~.	+	I usually found English difficult, that’s why I wanted to get confidence in it, at the same time exploring engineering field and technology. That is the reason I decided to join global camp. I hope my English conversation skills improve as I speak English with teachers. Also, I hope it will help my future by researching and learning about technology.
		+	I choose this topic because I could learn a lot about the science and technology of the Goryeo Dynasty by studying cannon and metal types. Before joining this camp I knew what cannon was used for, how it was used, how to make metal types, and the background of metal types which was used during the Goryeo Dynasty. And I knew about Gutenberg in Germany. During global camp I learned more about cannon and the scientific principles of cannon. By comparing cannon from the Goryeo Dynasty to that of China and Europe, I also learned about the pros and cons of each other. I learned more about metal types from the Goryeo Dynasty, especially about the background, how they were made, the merits, and the influence of metal types from Germany. I think I understood the cannons and metal types better by doing my own search.
		+	My role in the team is to research about metal types in Germany and make an announcement about metal types in Germany.
		+	Through global camp, I can get interested in English and have confidence in my presentation. By working with the team, I was able to develop a sense of community and cooperation.
		+	In future I want to become an architect so, as I learned more about the technology of the Goryeo Dynasty during this camp looks like it will help me to achieve my goal.

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