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Lyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 김바다 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 김바○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

2019-01-11T02:12:56Z

Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 김바다 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 김바○ 문서로 옮겼습니다

김바다: /* 2019 Winter Personal Essay */

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‎2019 Winter Personal Essay

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-|이름 =
+|학번 = 1705
-|영문 =
+|위키아이디= 김바○
-|학번 =
-|팀번호 =
 |위키아이디=
 }}
 ==2019 Winter Personal Essay==
-<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team #]]'''''</center>
+<center>'''''[[GGHS 2019 Winter - Team 5]]'''''</center>
-  '''''Remembering the Pain of Korea''''' - 10705 Kim Bada
+  '''''Remembering the Pain of Korea'''''
 '''Why I joined in Global Camp'''
-[[파일:C0B46583-A36B-4B0D-9FE2-F3C561D96904.jpeg|섬네일|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 I also participated in the global camp during the summer vacation. At that time, I tried to use English that I don’t usually use, and learned a lot. I was able to experience a lot of learning by talking about the topic with friends and sisters who chose the same topic, exploring the topic. I had a great experience at the last Global Camp, so I wanted to do it again.
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 '''Global camp before and after, my knowledge of human rights of Koreans in Japanese occupation period'''
-[[파일:4B8CF042-2A5B-48E6-86C2-60E12DFAE9B2.jpeg|섬네일|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 When I learned about Japanese occupation in Korean history class, Japan violated the human rights of the Korean people by prohibit the use of Korean, comfort women, forced labor, oppression of the press, looting, flogging. Even, Japan did not treat Koreans as human and trampled on their human rights. Participating the global camp, I could explore more about Korean human rights violations in the Japanese occupation. I found out that many newspapers and magazines tried to record and publicize the atrocities of Japan in the face of oppression. Like this, the press used as a means of national movement against the Japanese imperial, but some pro-Japanese press abused the press with great influence by using to convey a distorted fact in favor of Japan.
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 '''What I felt and learned through the Global Camp'''
-[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|섬네일|왼쪽|Team 5 presents the information they researched.]]
 I am grateful for the opportunity to speak English and write a paper in English while joining the global camp. When I used and applied English, which was usually only seen as a formal and hard test, I felt closer to English. Also, English seems to be a tool for communication and expression, not a score, so I want to learn more to communicate and express myself in English. And when I become a broadcaster, I will try to show viewers only the right things that are not distorted like newspapers, magazines that tried to convey the right information in the face of danger.
 There is a saying, "There is no future for people who forget history." The positive things that have happened in the past should be used as an example, and the negative things should not happen again. People sometimes make mistakes and fail. But it is stupid to repeat past mistakes and failures alike. We should learn from past events and should not repeat past mistakes and failures. History and country are the same as this. We must learn and analyze the painful history of the past and must not repeat it in the future. Also, we should heal the wounds of the time. We still have unhealed wounds. We ask for a sincere apology from Japan. Japan must mention all the atrocities committed during Japanese occupation one by one, apologizing sincerely. They should apologize until they can be forgiven by touching the hearts of the victims. I hope that this factor, which currently acts as an obstacle to the exchange between Korea and Japan, will be resolved quickly.
 ==2018 Summer Personal Essay==
-  '''Past and Present Conversations on Women's Human Rights''' - 10705 Kim Ba Da
+  '''Past and Present Conversations on Women's Human Rights'''
-I knew that 'Global Forum Camp' is a camp where people from similar fields communicate in English and produce results. So for me it was a wonderful opportunities to improve my english and have a meaningful activities. Above all, I had so many expectations from this camp, like I will get a chance to share my feelings and explore my area of interest as well as share my stories and thoughts with same minded people. [[파일:다운로드 (1).jpg|섬네일|Teacher gave us some drinks and candies.]]
+I knew that 'Global Forum Camp' is a camp where people from similar fields communicate in English and produce results. So for me it was a wonderful opportunities to improve my english and have a meaningful activities. Above all, I had so many expectations from this camp, like I will get a chance to share my feelings and explore my area of interest as well as share my stories and thoughts with same minded people.
-I was fascinated by the influence of broadcasting and media, and wanted to send my message to many people to make a better world. My career path was broadcasting and media, and I was interested in social issues. In particular, I was mostly interested in women's human rights issues, and wanted to led a comparative analysis of women's social status in the ' society ' field : focusing on changes in the Goryeo, Joseon and the present time. I also wanted to practice with a critical viewpoint. I am a feminist and I have a little knowledge about feminism. I was in touch with feminism because of our middle school friends. They used to influence me a lot. My feminist friends wanted to improve the life of women in modern society, and that is the reason I came close to them. [[파일:다운로드!.jpg|섬네일|We were working hard.]]
+I was fascinated by the influence of broadcasting and media, and wanted to send my message to many people to make a better world. My career path was broadcasting and media, and I was interested in social issues. In particular, I was mostly interested in women's human rights issues, and wanted to led a comparative analysis of women's social status in the ' society ' field : focusing on changes in the Goryeo, Joseon and the present time. I also wanted to practice with a critical viewpoint. I am a feminist and I have a little knowledge about feminism. I was in touch with feminism because of our middle school friends. They used to influence me a lot. My feminist friends wanted to improve the life of women in modern society, and that is the reason I came close to them.

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 '''What I felt and learned through the Global Camp'''
-[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|섬네일|왼쪽|Team 5 is presenting content they explored.]]
+[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|섬네일|왼쪽|Team 5 presents the information they researched.]]
 I am grateful for the opportunity to speak English and write a paper in English while joining the global camp. When I used and applied English, which was usually only seen as a formal and hard test, I felt closer to English. Also, English seems to be a tool for communication and expression, not a score, so I want to learn more to communicate and express myself in English. And when I become a broadcaster, I will try to show viewers only the right things that are not distorted like newspapers, magazines that tried to convey the right information in the face of danger.
 There is a saying, "There is no future for people who forget history." The positive things that have happened in the past should be used as an example, and the negative things should not happen again. People sometimes make mistakes and fail. But it is stupid to repeat past mistakes and failures alike. We should learn from past events and should not repeat past mistakes and failures. History and country are the same as this. We must learn and analyze the painful history of the past and must not repeat it in the future. Also, we should heal the wounds of the time. We still have unhealed wounds. We ask for a sincere apology from Japan. Japan must mention all the atrocities committed during Japanese occupation one by one, apologizing sincerely. They should apologize until they can be forgiven by touching the hearts of the victims. I hope that this factor, which currently acts as an obstacle to the exchange between Korea and Japan, will be resolved quickly.

@@ 32번째 줄: / 32번째 줄: @@
 '''What I felt and learned through the Global Camp'''
-[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|섬네일|왼쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
+[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|섬네일|왼쪽|Team 5 is presenting content they explored.]]
 I am grateful for the opportunity to speak English and write a paper in English while joining the global camp. When I used and applied English, which was usually only seen as a formal and hard test, I felt closer to English. Also, English seems to be a tool for communication and expression, not a score, so I want to learn more to communicate and express myself in English. And when I become a broadcaster, I will try to show viewers only the right things that are not distorted like newspapers, magazines that tried to convey the right information in the face of danger.
 There is a saying, "There is no future for people who forget history." The positive things that have happened in the past should be used as an example, and the negative things should not happen again. People sometimes make mistakes and fail. But it is stupid to repeat past mistakes and failures alike. We should learn from past events and should not repeat past mistakes and failures. History and country are the same as this. We must learn and analyze the painful history of the past and must not repeat it in the future. Also, we should heal the wounds of the time. We still have unhealed wounds. We ask for a sincere apology from Japan. Japan must mention all the atrocities committed during Japanese occupation one by one, apologizing sincerely. They should apologize until they can be forgiven by touching the hearts of the victims. I hope that this factor, which currently acts as an obstacle to the exchange between Korea and Japan, will be resolved quickly.

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   '''''Remembering the Pain of Korea''''' - 10705 Kim Bada
 '''Why I joined in Global Camp'''
-[[파일:C0B46583-A36B-4B0D-9FE2-F3C561D96904.jpeg|프레임|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
+[[파일:C0B46583-A36B-4B0D-9FE2-F3C561D96904.jpeg|섬네일|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 I also participated in the global camp during the summer vacation. At that time, I tried to use English that I don’t usually use, and learned a lot. I was able to experience a lot of learning by talking about the topic with friends and sisters who chose the same topic, exploring the topic. I had a great experience at the last Global Camp, so I wanted to do it again.
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 '''Global camp before and after, my knowledge of human rights of Koreans in Japanese occupation period'''
-[[파일:4B8CF042-2A5B-48E6-86C2-60E12DFAE9B2.jpeg|프레임|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
+[[파일:4B8CF042-2A5B-48E6-86C2-60E12DFAE9B2.jpeg|섬네일|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 When I learned about Japanese occupation in Korean history class, Japan violated the human rights of the Korean people by prohibit the use of Korean, comfort women, forced labor, oppression of the press, looting, flogging. Even, Japan did not treat Koreans as human and trampled on their human rights. Participating the global camp, I could explore more about Korean human rights violations in the Japanese occupation. I found out that many newspapers and magazines tried to record and publicize the atrocities of Japan in the face of oppression. Like this, the press used as a means of national movement against the Japanese imperial, but some pro-Japanese press abused the press with great influence by using to convey a distorted fact in favor of Japan.
@@ 32번째 줄: / 32번째 줄: @@
 '''What I felt and learned through the Global Camp'''
-[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|프레임|왼쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
+[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|섬네일|왼쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 I am grateful for the opportunity to speak English and write a paper in English while joining the global camp. When I used and applied English, which was usually only seen as a formal and hard test, I felt closer to English. Also, English seems to be a tool for communication and expression, not a score, so I want to learn more to communicate and express myself in English. And when I become a broadcaster, I will try to show viewers only the right things that are not distorted like newspapers, magazines that tried to convey the right information in the face of danger.
 There is a saying, "There is no future for people who forget history." The positive things that have happened in the past should be used as an example, and the negative things should not happen again. People sometimes make mistakes and fail. But it is stupid to repeat past mistakes and failures alike. We should learn from past events and should not repeat past mistakes and failures. History and country are the same as this. We must learn and analyze the painful history of the past and must not repeat it in the future. Also, we should heal the wounds of the time. We still have unhealed wounds. We ask for a sincere apology from Japan. Japan must mention all the atrocities committed during Japanese occupation one by one, apologizing sincerely. They should apologize until they can be forgiven by touching the hearts of the victims. I hope that this factor, which currently acts as an obstacle to the exchange between Korea and Japan, will be resolved quickly.

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   '''''Remembering the Pain of Korea''''' - 10705 Kim Bada
 '''Why I joined in Global Camp'''
-[[파일:C0B46583-A36B-4B0D-9FE2-F3C561D96904.jpeg|thumb|오른쪽|사진]]
+[[파일:C0B46583-A36B-4B0D-9FE2-F3C561D96904.jpeg|프레임|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 I also participated in the global camp during the summer vacation. At that time, I tried to use English that I don’t usually use, and learned a lot. I was able to experience a lot of learning by talking about the topic with friends and sisters who chose the same topic, exploring the topic. I had a great experience at the last Global Camp, so I wanted to do it again.
@@ 23번째 줄: / 22번째 줄: @@
 '''Global camp before and after, my knowledge of human rights of Koreans in Japanese occupation period'''
+[[파일:4B8CF042-2A5B-48E6-86C2-60E12DFAE9B2.jpeg|프레임|오른쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 When I learned about Japanese occupation in Korean history class, Japan violated the human rights of the Korean people by prohibit the use of Korean, comfort women, forced labor, oppression of the press, looting, flogging. Even, Japan did not treat Koreans as human and trampled on their human rights. Participating the global camp, I could explore more about Korean human rights violations in the Japanese occupation. I found out that many newspapers and magazines tried to record and publicize the atrocities of Japan in the face of oppression. Like this, the press used as a means of national movement against the Japanese imperial, but some pro-Japanese press abused the press with great influence by using to convey a distorted fact in favor of Japan.
@@ 33번째 줄: / 32번째 줄: @@
 '''What I felt and learned through the Global Camp'''
+[[파일:8A0A5B9B-9013-4D61-B2C4-E49BB631BE73.jpeg|프레임|왼쪽|Our hands mean team 5.]]
 I am grateful for the opportunity to speak English and write a paper in English while joining the global camp. When I used and applied English, which was usually only seen as a formal and hard test, I felt closer to English. Also, English seems to be a tool for communication and expression, not a score, so I want to learn more to communicate and express myself in English. And when I become a broadcaster, I will try to show viewers only the right things that are not distorted like newspapers, magazines that tried to convey the right information in the face of danger.
 There is a saying, "There is no future for people who forget history." The positive things that have happened in the past should be used as an example, and the negative things should not happen again. People sometimes make mistakes and fail. But it is stupid to repeat past mistakes and failures alike. We should learn from past events and should not repeat past mistakes and failures. History and country are the same as this. We must learn and analyze the painful history of the past and must not repeat it in the future. Also, we should heal the wounds of the time. We still have unhealed wounds. We ask for a sincere apology from Japan. Japan must mention all the atrocities committed during Japanese occupation one by one, apologizing sincerely. They should apologize until they can be forgiven by touching the hearts of the victims. I hope that this factor, which currently acts as an obstacle to the exchange between Korea and Japan, will be resolved quickly.

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