Nongsajikseol - Growing sesame - 편집 역사

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‎Student 2: 에벨린

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 *상(each)화(mix)
 **Mixing --> Mix according to a ratio of?
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+*Title
+**Original script has problems with punctuation
+**향명 임 --> read as 참
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 若熟田則四月上旬, 麥根田則趂刈麥後, 和糞灰稀種。 <br/><br/>
 ○又一法, 以白胡麻三分, 晩小豆一分, 相和種之。 或以菉豆二分, 胡麻一分相和亦得。 耕訖作畝, 以所和種均撒覆土。 <br/><br/>
-○油麻<small>【鄕名: 水荏子】</small>: 路邊或田畔宜種。 每科相去一尺。<small>【密則無枝少實。】</small>
+○油麻<small>【鄕名水荏子】</small>: 路邊或田畔宜種。 每科相去一尺。<small>【密則無枝少實。】</small>
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-|種胡麻<small>【鄕名眞荏子。八稜者多油。附油麻。】: </small>
+|種胡麻<small>【鄕名眞荏子。八稜者多油。】【附油麻。】: </small>
 性宜荒地。<small>【白壤尤良。】</small> <br/>
 四月間雨後, <small>【不因雨則不生。】</small> 耕地撒種。 用檑木<small>【鄕名: 古音波】</small>, 破塊覆土。 鋤不過再。  <br/>

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	==='''Student 2: 에벨린'''===		==='''Student 2: 에벨린'''===
		+	*Line 1:
		+	**八稜 p'allŭng. What does this refer to? 8 corners?
		+	**This is a common mistake throughout the text: '''Chinimja known locally as'''
		+	*Line 3:
		+	**Dirt clods? Soil? Lump of earth?
		+	**覆土 땅을 덮는다 Cover the soil?
		+	*Line 4:
		+	**Hoe no more than twice, '''cutting as it ripens''', and '''having tying it''' into small bundles (large bundles are hard to dry), make a pile by leaning five or six bundles against each other.
		+	**Cutting as...隨 "to follow / to allow / subsequently"
		+	**tying it into small bundles
		+	**this sentence still sounds a bit awkward to me
		+	*Line 5
		+	**Original: 候口開逐束
		+	**Korean: (호마의) 입이 벌어지면
		+	**English: Wait for the mouth of the sesame to open
		+	** 倒 뒤집어 flipping each bundle vertically?
		+	*Line 6
		+	**Tap once every three days, and this is all completed after four or five times.
		+	**Tap once every three days. It will be completed after [repeating this process] four or five times.
		+	*Line 7
		+	**If the field is fertile, then in the first ten days of the fourth month, for barley roots, after immediately cutting the barley, mix with manure and ash and sparsely sow them.
		+	** This sentence sounds overly complicated.
		+	*Line 8
		+	**Another method?
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 四月間雨後, <small>【不因雨則不生。】</small> 耕地撒種。 用檑木<small>【鄕名: 古音波】</small>, 破塊覆土。 鋤不過再。  <br/>
 隨熟刈之。 作束欲小。<small>【束大難乾。】</small> 五六束相倚爲叢。  <br/>
-候口開, 逐束倒堅, 以小杖輕打, 取了還叢之。 三日一打, 四五遍乃盡。  <br/>
+候口開, 逐束倒竪, 以小杖輕打, 取了還叢之。 三日一打, 四五遍乃盡。  <br/>
 若熟田則四月上旬, 麥根田則趂刈麥後, 和糞灰稀種。 <br/><br/>
 ○又一法, 以白胡麻三分, 晩小豆一分, 相和種之。 或以菉豆二分, 胡麻一分相和亦得。 耕訖作畝, 以所和種均撒覆土。 <br/><br/>

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-<center><font size='6'>種胡麻 鄕名眞荏子 Growing sesame</font></center>
+<center><font size='6'>種胡麻 <small>【鄕名: 眞荏子】</small>
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