2019 推句 05 - 07 - 편집 역사

2019년 7월 7일 (일) 14:55에 Ewaddell님의 편집

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‎Poem 5 : Ethan

2019-07-05T14:23:45Z

‎Poem 6 : Olga

2019-07-04T23:46:47Z

2019-07-04T23:44:39Z

2019-07-04T23:02:05Z

‎Poem 6 : Olga

2019-07-04T23:01:41Z

2019-07-04T23:00:47Z

‎Poem 6 : name

2019-07-04T12:54:46Z

‎Poem 7 : name

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	*Discussion Questions:		*Discussion Questions:
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		+	(EW) Should we choose to exclusively include or exclude "like" in the first, second and fourth lines?

	==='''Poem 7 : Canan'''===		==='''Poem 7 : Canan'''===

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 Spring water fills ponds everywhere.
-Summer clouds abound in strange peaks.
+Summer clouds abound in sublime peaks.
 Fall's moon casts bright light far and wide

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 *Discussion Questions:
-(YO) How should we translate 奇峰? "Strange peaks" seems a bit off. That 奇 intends to mean the kind of stunning sight that makes us go "awww," I think. Something out of the ordinary. Marvelous? Astounding? Amazing? This is when we realize many of our words may carry connotations or feels different from their etyma, and make us hesitate to use.
+(YO) How should we translate 奇峰? "Strange peaks" seems a bit off. That 奇 intends to mean the kind of stunning sight that makes us go "awww," I think. Something out of the ordinary. Marvelous? Astounding? Amazing? This is when we realize many of our words may carry connotations or feels different from their etyma, and make us hesitate to use.<br />
 ==='''Poem 6 : Olga'''===

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 ==='''Poem 6 : Olga'''===
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-Sun and moon are birds in a cage;<br /><br />
+Sun and moon are birds in a cage;<br />
-Sky and earth are like duckweed over water.<br /><br />
+Sky and earth are like duckweed over water.<br />
-White clouds cover the top of the mountains;<br /><br />
+White clouds cover the top of the mountains;<br />
 The moon is like a pearl in the water.
-*Discussion Questions:<br />
+*Discussion Questions:
 ==='''Poem 7 : Canan'''===

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 How do we translate 作 in the last line? Since it is a poem does it have to be parallel to 爲? If so,  maybe:  "Stars make [the sight of] scattered pearls of a hat string"<br />
-(YO) This is an interesting thing to notice. Both 為 and 作 have the same meaning of "make" in the registered senses, but they also often function as a copula ('is'). Perhaps it was intentional to use them in either sense, switching their meaning like in a game?
+(YO) This is an interesting thing to notice. Both 為 and 作 have the same meaning of "make" in the registered senses, but they also often function as a copula ('is'). Perhaps it was intentional to use them in either sense, switching their meaning like in a game?  By the way, shouldn't it be "scattered pearls from a ''broken'' hat string?
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 Winter hills' lonely pine tree stands out.
-''Italic text''==='''Poem 6 : Olga'''===
+==='''Poem 6 : Olga'''===
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 Sun and moon are birds in a cage;<br />