2019 推句 01 - 04 - 편집 역사

2019년 7월 7일 (일) 13:10에 Youngoh64님의 편집

2019-07-07T13:10:46Z

2019-07-07T05:20:14Z

‎Poem 1 : Olga

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2019-07-04T23:25:57Z

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2019-07-04T02:25:10Z

‎Poem 4 : name

2019-07-03T13:46:46Z

‎Poem 4 : name

2019-07-03T12:22:37Z

‎Poem 1 : Olga

2019-07-03T12:22:14Z

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 . In the last line could we take a liberty to say "the mountains are ''standing tall''" to make a sentence structure parallel to the one in line three?<br />
 (YO) I'd be okay with it. For the second line, by the way,  would it be "herbs and trees are born ''from'' it" or ''on'' it?<br />
-(Stella) I like the sound of '''from'' it' because it emphasizes the the fact that the earth, with its thickness, is the ''source'' of the plants' nourishment, rather than simply their location.
+(Stella) I like the sound of '''from'' it' because it emphasizes the the fact that the earth, with its thickness, is the ''source'' of the plants' nourishment, rather than simply their location.<br />
 ==='''Poem 3 : Ethan'''===

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 . In the last line could we take a liberty to say "the mountains are ''standing tall''" to make a sentence structure parallel to the one in line three?<br />
-(YO) I'd be okay with it. For the second line, by the way,  would it be "herbs and trees are born ''from'' it" or ''on'' it?
+(YO) I'd be okay with it. For the second line, by the way,  would it be "herbs and trees are born ''from'' it" or ''on'' it?<br />
 ==='''Poem 3 : Ethan'''===

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 . In the last line could we take a liberty to say "the mountains are ''standing tall''" to make a sentence structure parallel to the one in line three?<br />
-(YO) I'd be okay with it. For the second line, by the way,  would it be "herbs and trees are born ''from'' it" or ''on'' in?
+(YO) I'd be okay with it. For the second line, by the way,  would it be "herbs and trees are born ''from'' it" or ''on'' it?
 ==='''Poem 3 : Ethan'''===

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 . Should 天 be consistently translated as Heaven, sky or from case to case as one or the other?<br />
-. In the last line could we take a liberty to say "the mountains are ''standing tall''" to make a sentence structure parallel to the one in line three?
+. In the last line could we take a liberty to say "the mountains are ''standing tall''" to make a sentence structure parallel to the one in line three?<br />
 ==='''Poem 3 : Ethan'''===

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 East and west are doors of sun and moon
-South and north are the path of wild goose.
+South and north are the path of wild geese.
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 Is the Mirror 100000 years old? Or is it reflecting 100000 years?
-NA: I want to say that the mirror is 100,000 years old because as we know (un-poetically) the sun and moon have been around longer than the rivers and mountains on earth so I think that could mean that this mirror is that old but there is potentially other mirrors that have existed before this one.
+NA: I want to say that the mirror is 100,000 years old because as we know (un-poetically) the sun and moon have been around longer than the rivers and mountains on earth so I think that could mean that this mirror is that old but there is potentially other mirrors that have existed before this one. <br />
 [[Category:2019 JSG Summer Hanmun Workshop]]
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 (YO) I'd look for a pair of words that hold similar kind of synonymy between them, so that it would convey a comparable variation.
-==='''Poem 4 : name'''===
+==='''Poem 4 : Canan'''===
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 Sun and moon, mirror of 100000 years

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 *Discussion Questions:
-. Should 天 be consistently translated as Heaven, sky or from case to case as one or the other?<br /><br />
+. Should 天 be consistently translated as Heaven, sky or from case to case as one or the other?<br />
 . In the last line could we take a liberty to say "the mountains are ''standing tall''" to make a sentence structure parallel to the one in line three?