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‎Sentence 14 : Stella

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‎Sentence 14 : (name)

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 *Discussion Questions: <br />
-How can we understand the idea that instead of five individual forces there is instead just one that cycles through each phase? What is the significance of understanding the five forces in this way?
+How can we understand the idea that instead of five individual forces there is instead just one that cycles through each phase? What is the significance of understanding the five forces in this way? <br />
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 [[Category: Intermediate Training Group]]

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 Metals, wood, fire, earth in the heaven make five planets. When on earth they become five forces. Metals with which we make utensils, wood with which we make buildings, earth makes grain. With water and fire make food. So, things that all people use there is nothing that is not a thing of the five forces.
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+==='''Sentence 18 : (Emma)'''===
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+The five forces themselves have their own way to give rise to each other. Water gives rise to wood, wood gives rise to fire, fire gives rise to earth, earth gives rise to metal, metal again gives rise to water. The mutual creation of the five forces is endless, people's use [of the 5 forces] is endless.
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-==='''Sentence 17 : (name)'''===
+==='''Sentence 17 : (Emma)'''===
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+Metals, wood, fire, earth in the heaven make five planets. When on earth they become five forces. Metals with which we make utensils, wood with which we make buildings, earth makes grain. With water and fire make food. So, things that all people use there is nothing that is not a thing of the five forces.
 ==='''Sentence 18 : (name)'''===

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		+	(YO) Since you rendered 沛然 adverbially into "torrentially," can we do something similar to 油然?

	==='''Sentence 16 : Kristina Kaltenbach'''===		==='''Sentence 16 : Kristina Kaltenbach'''===

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		+	(YO) For 興雲霧, I can see why you translated it "clouds and fog appear." To show its V (興) + O (雲霧) structure, we need a subject, but it is not clear. Can we say "it causes/gives rise to clouds and fogs" where "it" refers to the entire preceding event?

	==='''Sentence 15 : Stella'''===		==='''Sentence 15 : Stella'''===

← 이전 판		2019년 7월 8일 (월) 13:19 판
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	When the ''ki'' of the mountains and seas interact above with the ''ki'' of the skies, the clouds and fog appear;<br />		When the ''ki'' of the mountains and seas interact above with the ''ki'' of the skies, the clouds and fog appear;<br />
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	降雨雪하며 爲霜露하며 生風雷라. <br />		降雨雪하며 爲霜露하며 生風雷라. <br />

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-==='''Sentence 15 : (name)'''===
+==='''Sentence 15 : Stella'''===
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+暑氣가 蒸鬱則油然而作雲하여 沛然而下雨하고,<br />
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+When the hot ''ki'' evaporates and condensates, it thickens and forms clouds, and rains down torrentially;<br />
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 ==='''Sentence 16 : Kristina Kaltenbach'''===
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-The sage kings of old draw lines dividing the land building country and capital. Amidst of the 4 oceans their states are 10,000 of their states exist there.<br />
+The sage kings of old drew lines dividing the land building country and capital. Amidst of the 4 oceans 10,000 of their states existed there.<br />
-Each state established provinces and prefectures in it, within each province and prefecture each divide into towns and villages. <br />
+Each state established provinces and prefectures in it, within the provinces and prefectures each divided into towns and villages. <br />
-They build city walls with which to fend off bandits, and made houses and made people live there.<br />
+They built city walls with which to fend off bandits, and made houses to make people live there.<br />
 They made plows and taught their people to farm and harvest, they made iron cauldrons and earthenware steamers and taught people how to eat cooked food.<br />
-And they made boats and carts with which to travel the roads.
+They made boats and carts with which to travel the roads.
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 =='''Translation'''==
-==='''Sentence 14 : (name)'''===
+==='''Sentence 14 : Stella'''===
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+山海之氣는 上與天氣로 相交면 則興雲霧하며<br />
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