2019 啓蒙篇 01 - 03 - 편집 역사

2019년 7월 7일 (일) 13:09에 Youngoh64님의 편집

2019-07-07T13:09:09Z

2019-07-07T05:15:51Z

‎Sentence 2 : Stella

2019-07-07T05:15:35Z

‎Sentence 2 : Stella

2019-07-07T04:30:12Z

‎Sentence 1 : I.Yi

2019-07-07T04:29:52Z

‎Sentence 1 : I.Yi

2019-07-02T23:54:58Z

‎Translation

2019-07-02T23:54:18Z

‎Translation

2019-07-02T14:49:32Z

2019-07-02T13:58:02Z

‎Sentence 2 : Stella Kim

2019-07-02T13:57:21Z

‎Sentence 2 : (name)

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 *Discussion Questions:
-(YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B"; Between heaven and earth, there are people." <br />
+(YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B": "Between heaven and earth, there are people." <br />
 (CA) Why is it the sky but not the earth? I think we should use either put the everywhere or leave it out totally.

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	(YO) I like the way you read it as a suggestive mood—it sounds different from the usual authoritative voice heard in this kind of accounts. By the way, how would you indicate the lexical shift from 定 to 總 in the last line?		(YO) I like the way you read it as a suggestive mood—it sounds different from the usual authoritative voice heard in this kind of accounts. By the way, how would you indicate the lexical shift from 定 to 總 in the last line?
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	(Stella) I forgot to indicate the shift in my original translation, but I think it would be best to add an adverb like 'inclusively' or 'collectively'.		(Stella) I forgot to indicate the shift in my original translation, but I think it would be best to add an adverb like 'inclusively' or 'collectively'.

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 (YO) I like the way you read it as a suggestive mood—it sounds different from the usual authoritative voice heard in this kind of accounts. By the way, how would you indicate the lexical shift from 定 to 總 in the last line?
+(Stella) I forgot to indicate the shift in my original translation, but I think it would be best to add an adverb like 'inclusively' or 'collectively'.
 ==='''Sentence 3 : Kristina Kaltenbach'''===

@@ 57번째 줄: / 57번째 줄: @@
 *Discussion Questions:
-(YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B"; Between heaven and earth, there are people."
+(YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B"; Between heaven and earth, there are people." <br />
 (CA) Why is it the sky but not the earth? I think we should use either put the everywhere or leave it out totally.

@@ 57번째 줄: / 57번째 줄: @@
 *Discussion Questions:
-(YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B"; Between heaven and earth, there are people." <br />
+(YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B"; Between heaven and earth, there are people."
 ==='''Sentence 2 : Stella'''===

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 (YO) I like the way you read it as a suggestive mood—it sounds different from the usual authoritative voice heard in this kind of accounts. By the way, how would you indicate the lexical shift from 定 to 總 in the last line?
 ==='''Sentence 3 : Kristina Kaltenbach'''===
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 *Discussion Questions:
 [[Category:2019 JSG Summer Hanmun Workshop]]
 [[Category:Intermediate Training Group]]

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 Above, the sky exists; below, there is earth. People are in the space of heaven and earth, and there are ten thousand things. As for the sun, moon, and stars, heaven ties and holds them in place. As for rivers, the sea, and mountains, the earth carries them. Father and son, lord and servant, old and young, husband and wife, and friends: these are the great relations of people.
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+*Discussion Questions:
 (YO) AB之間 would be "the space between A and B," and we can just take it as "between A and B"; Between heaven and earth, there are people." <br />
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 <br />
 This [the aforementioned] is ''Sup'yŏn''.
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 (YO) I like the way you read it as a suggestive mood—it sounds different from the usual authoritative voice heard in this kind of accounts. By the way, how would you indicate the lexical shift from 定 to 總 in the last line?
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 When it is night, then the moon and the stars appear visibly in it.
 [[Category:2019 JSG Summer Hanmun Workshop]]
 [[Category:Intermediate Training Group]]