2018 推句 41 - 50 - 편집 역사

Youngoh64: /* Poem 50 : (Okyang) */

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‎Poem 50 : (Okyang)

Youngoh64: /* Poem 41 : (Fran) */

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‎Poem 41 : (Fran)

Kyrie: /* Poem 50 : (Okyang) */

2018-07-17T11:27:58Z

‎Poem 50 : (Okyang)

2018년 7월 16일 (월) 12:10에 Okyang Chae-Duporge님의 편집

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Chof: /* Student 2 : (Kyrie) */

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2018-07-16T11:13:33Z

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2018-07-16T09:28:01Z

‎Student 2 : (Kyrie)

Admin: 새 문서: =='''Original Script'''== {{원문텍스트 | = '''::: 推句 :::''' 41. 馬行千里路요 牛耕百畝田이라. 馬行駒隨後요 牛耕犢臥原이라. 46. 花紅黃蜂...

2018-07-02T17:29:02Z

새 문서: =='''Original Script'''== {{원문텍스트 | = '''::: 推句 :::''' 41. 馬行千里路요 牛耕百畝田이라. 馬行駒隨後요 牛耕犢臥原이라. 46. 花紅黃蜂...

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=='''Original Script'''==

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'''::: 推句 :::'''
41.

馬行千里路요

牛耕百畝田이라.

馬行駒隨後요

牛耕犢臥原이라.

46.

花紅黃蜂鬧요

草錄白馬嘶라.

山雨夜鳴竹이요

草蟲秋入牀이라.

50.

林風涼不絶이요

山月曉仍明이라.

竹筍尖如筆이요

松葉細似針이라.

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 . A ''li'' is the Chinese mile. A thousand ''li'' is equivalent to 500 kilometers.
-. A ''mu'' is a measure of land that has varied in size throughout Chinese reigns. It ranges from five to nine ''mu'' to an acre.
+. A ''mu'' is a measure of land that has varied in size throughout Chinese reigns. It ranges from five to nine ''mu'' to an acre.<br />
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 The bamboo shoot is pointed like a writing brush,
-Fine needles are fine like needles.
+Pine needles are fine like needles.
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+(Kyrie) As we discussed in class, the last line is difficult to translate without repetition. In class we were trying to think of synonyms for "pine needles" but what if we tried to find another word for "needle"? Maybe "pins"?
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 (Fran): I think I would prefer the translation of the third line as: "At night the mountain rain gives voice to the bamboo." I think this captures the connotation of 鳴 as a cry or something vocalized. Also the phrase in the fourth line "enter their beds" makes it sound like its the insects' beds rather than people's beds. So perhaps eliminate "their" and simply say "insects enter the bedchamber"? Maybe "bedchamber" is going too far, but I think it makes it clear that this is a human dwelling.
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 The horse travels the thousand ''li'' road,1
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 The flowers are red and the yellow bees buzz,
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 (Fran): I think I would prefer the translation of the third line as: "At night the mountain rain gives voice to the bamboo." I think this captures the connotation of 鳴 as a cry or something vocalized. Also the phrase in the fourth line "enter their beds" makes it sound like its the insects' beds rather than people's beds. So perhaps eliminate "their" and simply say "insects enter the bedchamber"? Maybe "bedchamber" is going too far, but I think it makes it clear that this is a human dwelling.
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 The flowers are red and the yellow bees buzz,
 The grass is green and the white horses neigh.
 In the night mountain rain makes bamboo resonate,
 In the Autumn grass insects enter their beds.