2018 推句 31 - 40 - 편집 역사

2018년 7월 16일 (월) 12:18에 Okyang Chae-Duporge님의 편집

2018-07-16T12:18:10Z

Youngoh64: /* Poem 37 : Bryan */

2018-07-16T11:36:07Z

‎Poem 37 : Bryan

2018년 7월 16일 (월) 02:45에 Brasoly님의 편집

2018-07-16T02:45:34Z

Youngoh64: /* Translation */

2018-07-15T22:00:30Z

‎Translation

Youngoh64: /* Poem 39 : (Fran) */

2018-07-12T15:48:33Z

‎Poem 39 : (Fran)

Youngoh64: /* Poem 39 : (Fran) */

2018-07-12T15:15:08Z

‎Poem 39 : (Fran)

Youngoh64: /* Poem 39 : (Fran) */

2018-07-12T15:14:26Z

‎Poem 39 : (Fran)

Youngoh64: /* Poem 39 : (Fran) */

2018-07-12T15:13:59Z

‎Poem 39 : (Fran)

Chof: /* Poem 39 : (Fran) */

2018-07-12T10:50:28Z

‎Poem 39 : (Fran)

Chof: /* Poem 39 : (Write your name) */

2018-07-12T10:48:59Z

‎Poem 39 : (Write your name)

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 ==='''Poem 32 : (Okyang)'''===
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-Birds are sleeping on the tree bordering the pond,
+Birds sleep, on the tree by the pond,
-A monk is knocking on a door under the moon.
+A monk knocks, on a door under the moon.
-Oars are going through the moon under the waves,
+Oars pass through the moon under the waves,
-A boat is pushing down the sky in the water.
+A boat presses the sky in the water.
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 + (Fran) I think I would find it more poetic if the lines were not in the -ing form (I forget the technical word for this tense). So instead, "Birds sleep on the tree bordering the pond; A monk knocks on a door under the moon; Oars pass through the moon under the waves; A boat presses the sky in the water."<br />
 (UO) I kinda wondered, what about "Birds sleep, on the tree by the pond; A monk knocks, on the door under the moon..."? As you can tell, I am thinking about the break after the first two syllables in each line (e.g., 鳥宿 / 池邊樹) in the original text.
 ==='''Poem 37 : Bryan'''===

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 *Discussion Questions:
-- I choose "to twitter" for 喧 and "to bark" for 吠.
+- I choose "to twitter" for 喧 and "to bark" for 吠. <br />
 - I think  it is more poetic if the lines are in the -ing form, to creat tempo and also includ the reader on the present time of the action.

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-==='''Poem 37 : (Write your name)'''===
+==='''Poem 37 : Bryan'''===
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 *Discussion Questions:
 ==='''Poem 39 : (Fran)'''===

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	(UO) I kinda wondered, what about "Birds sleep, on the tree by the pond; A monk knocks, on the door under the moon..."? As you can tell, I am thinking about the break after the first two syllables in each line (e.g., 鳥宿 / 池邊樹) in the original text.		(UO) I kinda wondered, what about "Birds sleep, on the tree by the pond; A monk knocks, on the door under the moon..."? As you can tell, I am thinking about the break after the first two syllables in each line (e.g., 鳥宿 / 池邊樹) in the original text.

−	~~==='''Student 2 : (Write your name)'''===~~
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 The moon descends on the paulownia tree;
-The wind surrounds the weeping willow.<ref>These first two lines are from a poem by Shao Yong (1011-1077) of the Song Dynasty. He was a neo-Confucian philosopher and mathematician influenced by his study of the ''Yijing'', which led him to believe that numbers are the key to understanding the universe. Shao Yong's ideas influenced Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz (1646-1716) and his development of the binary arithmetic system.</ref>
+The wind surrounds the weeping willow.<ref>These first two lines are from a poem by Shao Yong (1011-1077) of the Song Dynasty. He was a neo-Confucian philosopher and mathematician influenced by his study of the ''Yijing'', which led him to believe that numbers are the key to understanding the universe. Shao Yong's ideas influenced Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz (1646-1716) and his development of the binary arithmetic system. (YO) The entire poem reads: "The moon descends on the paulownia tree; The wind surrounds the weeping willow. In the depth of the courtyard people are quiet again; Of this scene, with whom do I speak?" 月到梧桐上，風來楊柳邊。院深人復靜，此景共誰言。(The poem is collected by Cheng Yi 程頤 (1033-1107) in his ''Yichuan Jirangji'' 伊川擊壤集, ''juan'' 12</ref>
 The thronging stars deploy in the blue sky,
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 + I am going for poetic impact here rather than literalism--so, for example, "The moon descends on the paulownia tree" rather than "The moon arrives on top of the paulownia tree."
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 The thronging stars deploy in the blue sky,
-The falling leaves battle on the autumn mountain.
+The falling leaves battle on the autumn mountain.<br />
 *Discussion Questions:

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 *Discussion Questions:
-Footnote 1: These first two lines are from a poem by Shao Yong (1011-1077) of the Song Dynasty. He was a neo-Confucian philosopher and mathematician influenced by his study of the ''Yijing'', which led him to believe that numbers were the key to understanding the universe. Shao Yong's ideas influenced Gottfried Leibniz (1646-1716) and his development of the binary arithmetic system.
+Footnote 1: These first two lines are from a poem by Shao Yong (1011-1077) of the Song Dynasty. He was a neo-Confucian philosopher and mathematician influenced by his study of the ''Yijing'', which led him to believe that numbers are the key to understanding the universe. Shao Yong's ideas influenced Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz (1646-1716) and his development of the binary arithmetic system.
 + I am going for poetic impact here rather than literalism--so, for example, "The moon descends on the paulownia tree" rather than "The moon arrives on top of the paulownia tree."