2018 推句 21 - 30 - 편집 역사

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‎Sentence 30 : (Kyrie)

2018-07-11T11:21:29Z

‎Sentence 24 : (Fran)

2018-07-11T11:20:19Z

‎Sentence 22 : (Althea Volpe)

2018-07-10T10:18:01Z

‎Sentence 30 : (Kyrie)

2018-07-10T10:12:23Z

‎Sentence 24 : (Write your name)

2018-07-10T07:58:44Z

‎Sentence 30 : (Kyrie)

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‎Sentence 22 : (Althea Volpe)

2018-07-09T15:34:33Z

‎Sentence 22 : (Althea Volpe)

2018-07-09T15:34:13Z

‎Sentence 22 : (Althea Volpe)

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 (Fran) It's interesting that you translated this poem into the active voice. It raises an interesting question about wanting to avoid the passive voice--something that I also raised in another passage. But the original poem here seems to be rendered in the passive: 細雨池中看 might be "The fine rain is seen in the middle of the pond." I wonder if it's important or not to keep that voice (if in fact I'm right about the Chinese actually being in passive voice).
-(Kyrie) Does the original poem seem to be in the passive voice because the verb appears at the end of the line?
+(Kyrie) Does the original poem seem to be in the passive voice because the verb appears at the end of the line? <br />
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@@ 86번째 줄: / 86번째 줄: @@
 (Fran) It's interesting that you translated this poem into the active voice. It raises an interesting question about wanting to avoid the passive voice--something that I also raised in another passage. But the original poem here seems to be rendered in the passive: 細雨池中看 might be "The fine rain is seen in the middle of the pond." I wonder if it's important or not to keep that voice (if in fact I'm right about the Chinese actually being in passive voice).
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 ==='''Sentence 24 : (Fran)'''===
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-The years pass and people's heads turn white.
+The years pass and people's heads turn white.<br />
-Autumn comes and the foliage turns yellow.
+Autumn comes and the foliage turns yellow.<br />
-After the rain the mountains seem bathed.
+After the rain the mountains seem bathed.<br />
-Before the wind the grasses appear drunk.
+Before the wind the grasses appear drunk.<br />
 *Discussion Questions:
-+ I just decided to leave the ambiguity of 風前. Poetry is meant to be polysemic.
++ I just decided to leave the ambiguity of 風前. Poetry is meant to be polysemic.<br />
 ==='''Sentence 30 : (Kyrie)'''===

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 + (YO) Line 1: "you are sadden by it '''and do not sweep them up'''."<br />
 Also in Line 4, it would be "zither inside the bamboo". But I wonder if it is zither inside '''a''' bamboo or zither inside bamboos (i.e., bamboo forest)".<br />
-+ I changed the translation with the corrections and I personally prefer the version "inside bamboos" because it gives me a sense of zither's sound diffusion.
++ I changed the translation with the corrections and I personally prefer the version "inside bamboos" because it gives me a sense of zither's sound diffusion.<br />
 ==='''Sentence 24 : (Fran)'''===

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 *Discussion Questions:
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 ==='''Sentence 22 : (Althea Volpe)'''===
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-Flowers fall and you are sadden by it
+Flowers fall and you are sadden by it '''and do not sweep them up'''
 The moon is bright and your love [for it] doesn’t make you sleep
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 Moon rises among the clouds and makes the sight of a mirror
-The wind becomes like bamboo inside the zither.
+The wind becomes like zither '''inside bamboos'''.
 *Discussion Questions:
 + (YO) Line 1: "you are sadden by it '''and do not sweep them up'''."<br />
 Also in Line 4, it would be "zither inside the bamboo". But I wonder if it is zither inside '''a''' bamboo or zither inside bamboos (i.e., bamboo forest)".<br />
 ==='''Sentence 24 : (Write your name)'''===

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		+	+ (YO) Line 1: "you are sadden by it '''and do not sweep them up'''."<br />
		+	Also in Line 4, it would be "zither inside the bamboo". But I wonder if it is zither inside '''a''' bamboo or zither inside bamboos (i.e., bamboo forest)".<br />

	==='''Sentence 24 : (Write your name)'''===		==='''Sentence 24 : (Write your name)'''===