2018 學語集 21 - 25 - 편집 역사

Jelenagledic: /* Translation */

2018-07-16T13:14:03Z

‎Translation

Nanlin: /* Sentence 23 : Kathy Lin */

2018-07-11T13:49:13Z

‎Sentence 23 : Kathy Lin

Nanlin: /* Sentence 24: Kathy Lin */

2018-07-11T13:47:20Z

‎Sentence 24: Kathy Lin

2018년 7월 11일 (수) 11:27에 Youngoh64님의 편집

2018-07-11T11:27:57Z

2018년 7월 10일 (화) 13:48에 Ewa Rzanna님의 편집

2018-07-10T13:48:07Z

2018년 7월 10일 (화) 13:29에 Ewa Rzanna님의 편집

2018-07-10T13:29:30Z

Chof: /* Student 3 : Kathy Lin */

2018-07-10T10:35:40Z

‎Student 3 : Kathy Lin

Chof: /* Student 1 : (Julian Butterfield) */

2018-07-10T10:30:33Z

‎Student 1 : (Julian Butterfield)

Thpepe: /* Student 4: Kathy Lin */

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‎Student 4: Kathy Lin

Thpepe: /* Student 4: Kathy Lin */

2018-07-09T14:09:42Z

‎Student 4: Kathy Lin

@@ 61번째 줄: / 61번째 줄: @@
 *Discussion Questions:
-# Does my translation of 長曰兄季曰弟 work around the repetition of English words sufficiently? I was trying to avoid reusing "older" and "younger" here.
+# Does my translation of 長曰兄季曰弟 work around the repetition of English words sufficiently? I was trying to avoid reusing "older" and "younger" here.<br />
 # Have I expanded 行 too much in translation?
 (Fran) I think I would prefer something more terse like "Likened to geese, they are aligned" in order to match the brevity of the line "Likened to trees, they share the same root."

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 *Discussion Questions:
 (Fran): So it's interesting you decided not to go with the "If not for X" pattern in translating 非師. It makes me wonder how much difference there is between saying, "Without a teacher" versus "If it weren't for a teacher". I like the brevity of the former.
 ==='''Sentence 24: Kathy Lin'''===

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	<sup>1</sup> footnotes		<sup>1</sup> footnotes
		+
		+	(NKL) thanks Petra!

	==='''Sentence 25 : (Ewa)'''===		==='''Sentence 25 : (Ewa)'''===

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-==='''(sample) : Young Kyun Oh'''===
+==='''Sentence 21 : (Julian Butterfield)'''===
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 The senior is called older brother, the junior is called younger brother. Likened to trees, they share the same root; likened to geese, they go in line with each other. The affection between older and younger is fraternal and loving, just so.
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 (Fran) I think I would prefer something more terse like "Likened to geese, they are aligned" in order to match the brevity of the line "Likened to trees, they share the same root."
-==='''Student 2 : (Julian Butterfield)'''===
+==='''Sentence 22 : (Julian Butterfield)'''===
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 The space between ruler and subject is that which is closed with righteousness. The ruler sees subjects as hands and feet, subjects see the ruler as the head. The way of serving as subject is loyalty and goodness, just so.
@@ 80번째 줄: / 74번째 줄: @@
 Kathy's comment: the image of space closing doesn't quite seem to capture a sense of "fitting." What about something like "The relation between ruler and subject is fitting because of righteousness"?
-==='''Student 3 : Kathy Lin'''===
+==='''Sentence 23 : Kathy Lin'''===
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 The teacher
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 (Fran): So it's interesting you decided not to go with the "If not for X" pattern in translating 非師. It makes me wonder how much difference there is between saying, "Without a teacher" versus "If it weren't for a teacher". I like the brevity of the former.
-==='''Student 4: Kathy Lin'''===
+==='''Sentence 24: Kathy Lin'''===
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 Learnedness
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 <sup>1</sup> footnotes
-==='''Student 5 : (Ewa)'''===
+==='''Sentence 25 : (Ewa)'''===
-----Reading books
+----
 While reading books, unify your mind and will, do not ponder on miscellaneous concerns, treat square volumes with respect, read diligently day and night until your eyes get used to it and the mouth develops a taste for it, and clarity appears by itself.
 *Discussion Questions:

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 *Discussion Questions:
-==='''Student 6 : (Write your name)'''===
+==='''Student 6 : (Ewa )'''===
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 *Discussion Questions:
 ==='''Student 7 : (Write your name)'''===

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	*Discussion Questions:		*Discussion Questions:
		+	(Fran): So it's interesting you decided not to go with the "If not for X" pattern in translating 非師. It makes me wonder how much difference there is between saying, "Without a teacher" versus "If it weren't for a teacher". I like the brevity of the former.

	==='''Student 4: Kathy Lin'''===		==='''Student 4: Kathy Lin'''===

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 +What was the way to insert footnotes again? </ref> something...?
-(Petra) you can use <sup>1</sup> (or use any other number in between) right next to the word and then write it down again like this<sup>1</sup>.
+(Petra) you can use <sup>1</sup> (or use any other number in between) right next to the word and then write it down again like this<sup>1</sup>. (have to look in the editing page)
 <sup>1</sup> footnotes