문장 6 - 10 - 편집 역사

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‎Translation

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‎Student 1 : Sanghoon Na

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‎Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae

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‎Student 13 : (Write your name)

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← 이전 판		2017년 8월 1일 (화) 06:06 판
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	The Fog, when the Qi of the earth rises but the Qi of the heaven do not respond, it instantly becomes the fog. If empty thing(fog) rises in short period, it is difficult to recognize a foot of land.		The Fog, when the Qi of the earth rises but the Qi of the heaven do not respond, it instantly becomes the fog. If empty thing(fog) rises in short period, it is difficult to recognize a foot of land.
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−	~~===Student 14 : (Write your name)===~~
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← 이전 판		2017년 7월 23일 (일) 02:10 판
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	Fog: When the '''airs {00氣 is translated into three different concepts. Try to make it consistent.00}''' of the earth go up but the airs of the heaven do not respond, then it becomes fog. In a short moment it breathes out and rises, which makes it hard to recognize [even] a '''tiny piece {%%foot%%}''' of land.		Fog: When the '''airs {00氣 is translated into three different concepts. Try to make it consistent.00}''' of the earth go up but the airs of the heaven do not respond, then it becomes fog. In a short moment it breathes out and rises, which makes it hard to recognize [even] a '''tiny piece {%%foot%%}''' of land.
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-Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It goes along with the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.
+Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes clouds. It goes along with the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.
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 . 雨: 雨者天地之霈澤時行濡物以生草木又養禾稼
-Rain: Rain is the '''{^[spring of]^}''' generous bounty of '''Nature {00Why not heave and earth?00}''' . When it comes, it '''wets {%%waters / douses%%}''' things. By doing so, it gives life to grass and trees, and also nurtures grains.
+Rain: Rain is the '''{^[spring of]^}''' generous bounty of '''Nature {00Why not heaven and earth?00}''' . When it comes, it '''wets {%%waters / douses%%}''' things. By doing so, it gives life to grass and trees, and also nurtures grains.
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 Fog: When the '''airs {00氣 is translated into three different concepts. Try to make it consistent.00}''' of the earth go up but the airs of the heaven do not respond, then it becomes fog. In a short moment it breathes out and rises, which makes it hard to recognize [even] a '''tiny piece {%%foot%%}''' of land.
 ===Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari===

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 22일 (토) 04:29 판
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−	Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It goes along the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.	+	Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It goes along with the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 22일 (토) 04:28 판
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−	Edited: Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It goes along the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.	+	Edited:
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		+	Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It goes along the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 22일 (토) 04:28 판
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	Cloud: Cloud is the mysterious '''mist {00Is it OK to translate 氣 mist?00}''' of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It '''goes after {%%goes along with?%%}''' the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.		Cloud: Cloud is the mysterious '''mist {00Is it OK to translate 氣 mist?00}''' of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It '''goes after {%%goes along with?%%}''' the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.
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		+	Edited: Cloud is the mysterious qi of the mountains and rivers, which evaporates and becomes cloud. It goes along the wind and gives rain and snow. It always follows the flying dragons.
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 The Dew, when it is the time of spring and summer, the energy of the heaven comes down and the energy of the earth rises. It changes into the dew and moisten plants, trees and 100 kinds of grains.
 . 雨: 雨者, 天地之霈澤, 時行濡物, 以生草木, 又養禾稼.
 The Rain is exuberant pouring down of the heaven and the earth. When the time goes, it soaks the things, with living grasses and trees, also nurturing grains.
 . 霧: 地氣發, 而天氣不應, 則爲霧, 片時噓起, 尺地難辨.

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:49 판
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	The Cloud is the spiritual Qi of mountains and streams. It vaporizes and becomes the cloud. It follows the wind blowing and moves around giving the rain and the snow. Constantly it accompanied around the flying dragon.		The Cloud is the spiritual Qi of mountains and streams. It vaporizes and becomes the cloud. It follows the wind blowing and moves around giving the rain and the snow. Constantly it accompanied around the flying dragon.
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	8. 露: 春夏之際, 天氣下降, 地氣上昇, 化爲露, 潤草木百穀.		8. 露: 春夏之際, 天氣下降, 地氣上昇, 化爲露, 潤草木百穀.

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 . Fog: If the ''qi'' of the earth arises, but the ''qi'' of the heaven does not respond, then it becomes fog. '''For {%%In%%}''' a short time, (fog) rolls in over (a place) and it becomes difficult to distinguish (even) a foot of land.
-===Student 13 : (Write your name)===
+===Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae ===
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 ===Student 14 : (Write your name)===
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← 이전 판		2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:45 판
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−	''Revised version''	+	'''Revised version'''

	Wind, which is the ''qi'' that the great earth breathes out, moves and rests according to time. Originally, it leaves no traces [yet] it can make sounds.		Wind, which is the ''qi'' that the great earth breathes out, moves and rests according to time. Originally, it leaves no traces [yet] it can make sounds.