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	Dogs: The way dogs become what they are is being raised in people's houses'''. They keep {%%, and keeping%%}''' the gates and '''guard {%%guarding%%}'''against thieves. If they see other people, then they growl.		Dogs: The way dogs become what they are is being raised in people's houses'''. They keep {%%, and keeping%%}''' the gates and '''guard {%%guarding%%}'''against thieves. If they see other people, then they growl.
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		+	Dogs: The way dogs become what they are is being raised in people's houses and keeping the gates and guarding against thieves. If they see other people, then they growl.

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	45. 狗 : 狗之爲物畜于人家守門備盜見人則狺狺		45. 狗 : 狗之爲物畜于人家守門備盜見人則狺狺

−	Dogs: The way of dogs being ~~a thing~~ is being raised by households, [they] guard the door and prepare [against] thieves. [When] seeing people, then [they] bark "ǔn ǔn".	+	Dogs: The way of dogs being things is being raised by households, [they] guard the door and prepare [against] thieves. [When] seeing people, then [they] bark "ǔn ǔn".

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	<sup>1</sup> A legendary judge of horses during the Spring and Autumn period.		<sup>1</sup> A legendary judge of horses during the Spring and Autumn period.
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		+	42. Birds and Beasts – Flying ones are called birds, running ones are called beasts. The feathered family and the furred family, their categories each number three hundred.
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		+	44. Horses – Horses' inherent trait [is that they] are good at running. Reaching far, none are like the horse, the reason why Bo Le appraised them to choose the good [ones].

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	44. 馬 : 馬之性善走致遠莫如馬故伯樂相之以取其良		44. 馬 : 馬之性善走致遠莫如馬故伯樂相之以取其良

−	Horses: The nature of horses [is to be] good at running. In reaching far [distances], there is nothing like the horses, therefore ~~Päk~~ Nak (Ch. Bo Le)<sup>1</sup> observed them with which to obtain the good [ones].	+	Horses: The nature of horses [is to be] good at running. In reaching far [distances], there is nothing like the horses, therefore Paeng Nak (Ch. Bo Le)<sup>1</sup> observed them with which to obtain the good [ones].

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 <sup>2</sup>: 狺狺 ('yinyin'), an onomatopeia which might have been used in the past for growling or even whining.
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 . Dog:<br />
-Dogs are things raised by households. They guard the door and are ready for thieves. When they see people they yap.
+'''Dogs are things {%%What the dogs are is that they are%%}''' raised by households. They guard the door and are ready for thieves. When they see people they yap.
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 . 牡丹: 東風吹, 牧丹盛開, 花之富貴者, 無雙第一國香, 故曰花中王
-Peonies: The east wind blows, Peonies flourishingly bloom. The richness of blooming flowers is without pair, the fragrance is the first in the state. Therefore, it is said that it is the king of flowers.
+Peonies: The east wind blows, '''{^and^}''' peonies flourishingly bloom. The richness preciousness^}''' of blooming flowers is without pair, the fragrance is the first in the state. Therefore, it is said that it is the king of flowers.
 . 禽獸: 飛者謂之禽, 走者謂之獸, 羽族毛族, 其類各有三百
-Birds and beasts: Those which fly are called birds. Those which walk are called beasts. The feathered family and the furred family, in their categories there are three hundreds each.
+Birds and beasts: Those which fly are called birds. Those which walk are called beasts. The feathered family and the furred family, in their categories there are three hundred each.
 . 牛: 角者牛也, 農人牧之以耕田, 無牛何以爲農
-Cows: Those which have horns are cows. Farmers raise them to cultivate the fields. How can they farm without cows?
+Cows: Those which have horns are cows. Farmers raise them to cultivate the fields. '''How can they farm without cows {%%Without cows, how can one farm%%}'''?
 . 馬: 馬之性善走, 致遠莫如馬, 故伯樂相之, 以取其良
-Horses: The nature of horses is good at running. There is nothing like horses that reach far. Therefore, Bo Le observed them with which to choose the good ones.
+Horses: The nature of horses is that it is good at running. '''There is nothing like horses that reach far {%%To reach far, nothing is as good as horses%%}'''. Therefore, Bo Le observed them with which to choose the good ones.
 . 狗: 狗之爲物, 畜于人家, 守門備盜, 見人則狺狺
-Dogs: What the dogs are the livestock in households, [Dogs] guard doors and protect against thieves.  When seeing people, then they are barking.
+Dogs: What the dogs are '''the livestock in households {%%is that they are raised in the household.%%}''' [Dogs] guard doors and protect against thieves.  When seeing people, then they are barking.
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 . 禽獸 : 飛者謂之禽走者謂之獸羽族毛族其類各有三百
-Birds and Beasts – Flying ones – call them birds; running ones – call them beasts. The feathered family and the furred family, their categories each number three hundred.
+Birds and Beasts – Flying ones '''– call' them {%%are called%%}''' birds; running ones '''– call them {%%are called%%}''' beasts. The feathered family and the furred family, their categories each number three hundred.
 . 牛 : 角者牛也農人牧之以耕田無牛何以爲農
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 . 馬 : 馬之性善走致遠莫如馬故伯樂相之以取其良
-Horses' inherent trait [is that they] are good at running. Reaching far, none are like the horse, the reason why Bo Le<sup>1</sup> used appearances to choose the good [ones].
+Horses' inherent trait [is that they] are good at running. Reaching far, none are like the horse, the reason why Bo Le<sup>1</sup> '''used appearances {%%appraised them%%}''' to choose the good [ones].
 . 狗 : 狗之爲物畜于人家守門備盜見人則狺狺