문장 31 - 35 - 편집 역사

Youngoh64: /* Student 14 : (Write your name) */

2017-08-01T06:09:55Z

‎Student 14 : (Write your name)

2017년 7월 22일 (토) 05:56에 Sanghoon Na님의 편집

2017-07-22T05:56:27Z

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2017-07-20T08:18:20Z

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Thpepe: /* Student 3 : Petra Sváková */

2017-07-19T14:16:35Z

‎Student 3 : Petra Sváková

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2017-07-19T12:00:16Z

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2017-07-19T11:59:57Z

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2017-07-18T15:01:48Z

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2017-07-18T13:14:13Z

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2017-07-18T10:27:48Z

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2017-07-17T15:59:57Z

‎Translation

← 이전 판		2017년 8월 1일 (화) 06:09 판
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	==='''Student 13 : (Write your name)'''===		==='''Student 13 : (Write your name)'''===
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← 이전 판		2017년 7월 22일 (토) 05:56 판
24번째 줄:		24번째 줄:

	Trees: '''[People] Plant [the] roots {%%They are rooted%%}''' in the ground. Branches and trunks gradually grow. In spring leaves sprout. In autumn leaves fall.		Trees: '''[People] Plant [the] roots {%%They are rooted%%}''' in the ground. Branches and trunks gradually grow. In spring leaves sprout. In autumn leaves fall.
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		+	Trees: They are rooted in the ground. Branches and trunks gradually grow. In spring leaves sprout. In autumn leaves fall.

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-==='''Student 7 : (Write your name)'''===
+==='''Student 7 : (Alexandre Le Marchand)'''===
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 ==='''Student 8 : Bryan Sauvadet'''===

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 Bamboos: [They are] vividly green, tall and constant. [They] do not change throughout the four seasons, the '''virtuous men {%%gentlemen%%}''' love them and plant them in [their] yards.
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 . 桃: 仲春之月始生華夭夭灼灼但得片時韶光
-Peaches: In the month of mid-spring, [they] start blossoming. [They are] '''luxuriant and brightly shining {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''' but [they] get only a brief moment to light up [and then they vanish].
+Peaches: In the month of mid-spring, [they] start blossoming. [They are] '''luxuriant and brightly shining<sup>3</sup> {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''' but [they] get only a brief moment to light up [and then they vanish].
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 <sup>2</sup> understand 'all flowers'
 ==='''Student 4 : (Write your name)'''===

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-Tree: The root (of a tree) is planted in the ground. Its branches and stems grow gradually. The tree comes into leaf in the spring, grows thick in the summer, and turns yellow in the fall.
+. Tree: The root (of a tree) is planted in the ground. Its branches and stems grow gradually. The tree comes into leaf in the spring, grows thick in the summer, and turns yellow in the fall.
 . Flower: Because of the breeze of east wind, hundred flowers then blossom. Some are red and others are white. Also, there are yellow and purple colors. Honey bees and butterflies come look for their fragrance in a timely manner.

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 In the month of mid-spring, they begin to bloom. Elegantly blossoming and brightly shining. But just on a short time of vernal light.
-==='''Student 9 : (Write your name)'''===
+==='''Student 9 : HeeJin Lee'''===
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 ==='''Student 10 : Jelena Gledić'''===

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 18일 (화) 10:27 판
126번째 줄:		126번째 줄:

	Peach – Starting to come alive and bloom in the second month of spring, [it is] '''tender and brilliant {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''', but [only] obtained in a brief moment of splendid light.		Peach – Starting to come alive and bloom in the second month of spring, [it is] '''tender and brilliant {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''', but [only] obtained in a brief moment of splendid light.
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		+	33. Bamboo – Very blue-green, highly faithful, [they] go through the four seasons but do not change. Gentlemen love planting them in [their] gardens.
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		+	35. Peach – Starting to come alive and bloom in the second month of spring, [it is] tender and brilliant,<sup>1</sup> but [only] obtained in a brief moment of splendid light.
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		+	<sup>1</sup>夭夭灼灼(K: yoyo chakchak; C: yaoyao zhuozhuo) can be found in the 周南 (K: Chu Nam; C: Zhou Nan) chapter of the Book of Poetry (詩經) being used to describe the peach as being beautiful in appearance.

	==='''Student 5 : (Jae Yong Chang)'''===		==='''Student 5 : (Jae Yong Chang)'''===

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 . 木: 植根于土枝幹漸長春則葉生秋則葉落
-Trees: [People] Plant [the] roots in the ground. Branches and trunks gradually grow. In spring leaves sprout. In autumn leaves fall.
+Trees: '''[People] Plant [the] roots {%%They are rooted%%}''' in the ground. Branches and trunks gradually grow. In spring leaves sprout. In autumn leaves fall.
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 . 松: 亭亭獨立蒼翠之色經歲寒不變君子愛之種于庭
-They are very upright, stand alone and of a verdant color. They pass the years of coldn and do not change. Virtuous men love them and plant them in the garden<sup>1</sup>.
+They are very upright, '''stand alone and of a verdant color. They pass the years of cold and do not change {%%standing alone. Their verdant color, passing a year of cold, does not change%%}'''. '''Virtuous men {%%Gentlemen%%}''' love them and plant them in the garden<sup>1</sup>.
 . 桃: 仲春之月始生華夭夭灼灼但得片時韶光
-The month of mid-spring, they start appearing and blooming. They are vigourous and shining, but they only get a fragmentary time and to illuminate.
+The month of mid-spring, they start appearing and blooming. They are vigorous and shining, but they only get a fragmentary time to illuminate. '''{00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}'''
-<sup>1</sup>: The character 庭 (ch'ông) is usually utilized to mean 'court' or 'courtyard'. The 'garden' mentionned in this text refers to a limited space supposed to imitate nature.
+<sup>1</sup>: The character 庭 (chông) is usually utilized to mean 'court' or 'courtyard'. The 'garden' mentioned in this text refers to a limited space supposed to imitate nature.
 ==='''Student 3 : Petra Sváková'''===
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 . 竹: 靑靑高節貫四時而不變君子愛之種于庭
-Bamboos: [They are] vividly green, tall and constant. [They] do not change throughout the four seasons, the virtuous men love them and plant them in [their] yards.
+Bamboos: [They are] vividly green, tall and constant. [They] do not change throughout the four seasons, the '''virtuous men {%%gentlemen%%}''' love them and plant them in [their] yards.
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 . 桃: 仲春之月始生華夭夭灼灼但得片時韶光
-Peaches: In the month of mid-spring, [they] start blossoming. [They are] luxuriant and brightly shining but [they] get only a brief moment to light up [and then they vanish].
+Peaches: In the month of mid-spring, [they] start blossoming. [They are] '''luxuriant and brightly shining {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''' but [they] get only a brief moment to light up [and then they vanish].
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 . 竹: 靑靑高節貫四時而不變君子愛之種于庭
-Bamboo – Very blue-green, tall, [divided into] knots, [they] go through the four seasons but do not change. Gentlemen love planting them in [their] gardens.
+Bamboo – Very blue-green, '''tall, [divided into] knots {00 also consider 高節 can be 'high fidelity' 00}''', [they] go through the four seasons but do not change. Gentlemen love planting them in [their] gardens.
 . 松: 亭亭獨立蒼翠之色經歲寒不變君子愛之種于庭
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 . 桃: 仲春之月始生華夭夭灼灼但得片時韶光
-Peach – Starting to come alive and bloom in the second month of spring, [it is] tender and brilliant, but [only] obtained in a brief moment of splendid light.
+Peach – Starting to come alive and bloom in the second month of spring, [it is] '''tender and brilliant {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''', but [only] obtained in a brief moment of splendid light.
 ==='''Student 5 : (Jae Yong Chang)'''===
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 . 木: 植根于土, 枝幹漸長, 春則葉生, 秋則葉落
-Trees: Plant roots in the ground. Branches and stream gradually grow. In spring leaves bloom; in autumn, leaves fall.
+Trees: '''Plant roots {%%They are rooted%%]''' in the ground. '''{^Their^}''' Branches and '''stream {%%stems%%}''' gradually grow. In spring leaves bloom; in autumn, leaves fall.
 . 花: 東風吹, 百花乃發, 或白或紅, 又有黃紫蜂蝶時, 來尋其香
-Flowers: East wind blows. one hundred of flowers bloom. Some are white and some red. Again there are some yellow and some purple. Bees and butterflies come to look for the fragrance.
+Flowers: East wind blows. one hundred flowers bloom. Some are white and some red. Again there are some yellow and some purple. Bees and butterflies come to look for the fragrance.
 . 竹: 靑靑高節, 貫四時而不變, 君子愛之, 種于庭
-Bamboos: Blue green and constancy, [They] pass by four seasons, but do not change. The gentle man love them and plant [them] in the garden.
+Bamboos: Blue green and constancy, [They] pass by four seasons, but do not change. The gentleman loves them and plants [them] in the garden.
 . 松: 亭亭獨立, 蒼翠之色, 經歲寒不變, 君子愛之, 種于庭
-Pines: [Pines] gracefully stand alone. Its color of blue and green is passing through years and doesn’t change. The gentle man love them and plant [them] in the garden.
+Pines: [Pines] gracefully stand alone. Its color of blue and green is passing through years and doesn’t change '''{^in the cold^}'''. The gentleman loves them and plants [them] in the garden.
 . 桃: 仲春之月, 始生華, 夭夭灼灼, 但得片時韶光
-Peaches: In the month of middle spring, [Peaches] begin making flowers.  [They are] young and elegant and brilliant. But [They] get a brief time and a beautiful time.
+Peaches: In the month of middle spring, [Peaches] begin making flowers.  [They are] young and elegant and brilliant. But [They] get a brief time '''and a beautiful time {%%to light up%%}'''.
 ==='''Student 6 : (Goeun Lee)'''===
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 桃: 仲春之月 始生華 夭夭灼灼 但得片時韶光
-In the month of midspring, peach flowers begin to bloom; [they look] youthful and colorful but [their beauty] illumines only briefly.
+In the month of midspring, peach flowers begin to bloom; [they look] '''youthful and colorful {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}''' but [their beauty] illumines only briefly.
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 . Peach:<br />
-In the mid-spring month, it starts to bear flowers, fresh-looking and vivid. But, it gets [just] an instant of glorious luster.
+In the mid-spring month, it starts to bear flowers, '''fresh-looking and vivid {00夭夭灼灼 can use a note.00}'''. But, it gets [just] an instant of glorious luster.
 ==='''Student 11 : (Write your name)'''===