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Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

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‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

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‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

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‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:37에 2bthebridge님의 편집

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2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:37에 2bthebridge님의 편집

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Sayia817: /* Translation */

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‎Translation

2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:35에 2bthebridge님의 편집

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Sayia817: /* Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae */

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‎Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae

Sayia817: /* Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae */

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‎Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae

Sayia817: /* Student 13 : (Write your name) */

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‎Student 13 : (Write your name)

← 이전 판		2018년 7월 1일 (일) 20:08 판
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	<sup>1</sup>: In this book, this redundant pattern ending in -者 could have been translated "That which is the...".		<sup>1</sup>: In this book, this redundant pattern ending in -者 could have been translated "That which is the...".
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	<sup>2</sup>: Pusang (Chinese: '''Fusang, pinyin''') and Yakmok (Chinese: '''Ruomu, pinyin''') are legendary trees respectively symbolizing the East and the West.		<sup>2</sup>: Pusang (Chinese: '''Fusang, pinyin''') and Yakmok (Chinese: '''Ruomu, pinyin''') are legendary trees respectively symbolizing the East and the West.

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 '''Edit''': The sky<sup>1</sup> is all azure, in the above, light and clear but also extremely high; the sun, the moon and the stars are tied there.
 . 地: 地者在下而博厚山川萬物皆載焉
 The earth is '''down {%%below%%}'''but also wide and thick; it carries the mountains, the rivers and ten thousand things '''{^on it^}'''.
 . 日: 日者太陽之精朝出于扶桑暮入于若木冬則短夏則長
 The sun is the energy of the great Yang; it 'gets out' '''{^in^}''' the morning from the Pusang and 'gets in' the evening '''at {%%into%%}''' the Yakmok<sup>1</sup>; when comes the winter it stays shortly, when comes the summer it stays '''longly {%%long%%}'''.
 . 月: 月者太陰之精遇夜而明望前漸圓望後漸缺

@@ 50번째 줄: / 50번째 줄: @@
 . 天: 天者蒼蒼在上輕淸而至高日月星辰繫焉
-'''The sky is what is blue and up {%%That which is a sky (or, simply, "Sky") is blue/azure in the above%%}''', light and clear but also extremely high; '''it ties the sun, the moon and the celestial bodies {The sun, the moon, and stars are bound/tied there%%}'''.
+What we call the sky is what is blue and up, light and clear but also extremely high; it ties the sun, the moon and the celestial bodies.
 . 地: 地者在下而博厚山川萬物皆載焉
@@ 69번째 줄: / 71번째 줄: @@
-<sup>1</sup>: Pusang (Chinese: '''Fusang, pinyin''') and Yakmok (Chinese: '''Ruomu, pinyin''') are legendary trees respectively symbolizing the East and the West.
+<sup>1</sup>: In this book, this redundant pattern ending in -者 could have been translated "That which is the...".
 ===Student 3 : Petra Sváková===

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:37 판
192번째 줄:		192번째 줄:
	The sun, which is the essence of Great yang, rises from busang tree <ref> a mythical tree which is said to be located in the East Sea. ''山海經, 海外東經''.</ref> in morning and sets down towards yangmok tree in evening. In winter, [its duration] is short; in summer, [its duration] is long.		The sun, which is the essence of Great yang, rises from busang tree <ref> a mythical tree which is said to be located in the East Sea. ''山海經, 海外東經''.</ref> in morning and sets down towards yangmok tree in evening. In winter, [its duration] is short; in summer, [its duration] is long.

−	The moon, which is the essence of Great yin~~. At night~~, it shines. Before fifteenth days, it becomes round little by little; after fifteenth days, it wanes gradually.	+	The moon, which is the essence of Great yin, shines at night. Before fifteenth days, it becomes round little by little; after fifteenth days, it wanes gradually.

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 Stars, which are the essence of all things, form the celestial body in the above. During daytime, they hide; at night, they become visible.
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 '''Revised version'''
@@ 193번째 줄: / 193번째 줄: @@
 The moon, which is the essence of Great yin. At night, it shines. Before fifteenth days, it becomes round little by little; after fifteenth days, it wanes gradually.
 ===Student 7 : (Alexandre Le Marchand)===

← 이전 판		2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:35 판
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	The Stars are the essential of all kinds of things. Going up and becoming the stars, in daytime it hides and at night it appears.		The Stars are the essential of all kinds of things. Going up and becoming the stars, in daytime it hides and at night it appears.

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← 이전 판		2017년 7월 20일 (목) 05:35 판
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		+	'''Revised version'''
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		+	The sky, which is deeply blue, exists in the above. Being light and clear, [it is] extremely high. The sun, moon and stars are tied there.
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		+	The earth, which exists in the below, is wide and dense. Mountains, rivers, and all things are together loaded on it.
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		+	The sun, which is the essence of Great yang, rises from busang tree <ref> a mythical tree which is said to be located in the East Sea. ''山海經, 海外東經''.</ref> in morning and sets down towards yangmok tree in evening. In winter, [its duration] is short; in summer, [its duration] is long.
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		+	The moon, which is the essence of Great yin. At night, it shines. Before fifteenth days, it becomes round little by little; after fifteenth days, it wanes gradually.

	===Student 7 : (Alexandre Le Marchand)===		===Student 7 : (Alexandre Le Marchand)===

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 The Earth is below and nourishes mountains and streams generally. The ten thousands of things(all sorts of things) is all carried by it.
 . 日: 日者, 太陽之精, 朝出于扶桑, 暮入于若木, 冬則短, 夏則長
 The Sun is the essential of great Yang. At morning it is came from Fusuang <ref> Fushang(扶桑): The tree from Shanhaijing(山海經). <海外東經>: 下有湯谷。湯谷上有扶桑，十日所浴，在黑齒北。居水中，有大木，九日居下枝，一日居上枝。 </ref>, and at night, it goes back to Ruomu. <ref> Ruomu(若木): The tree from Shanhaijing(山海經). <海內經>: 南海之內，黑水、青水之間，有木名曰若木，若水出焉。</ref> If (it is) winter, (the sun is) short, and if (it is) summer, (the sun is) long.
 . 月: 月者, 太陰之精, 遇夜而明, 望前漸圓, 望後漸缺.

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 . 天: 天者蒼蒼在上, 輕淸而至高, 日月星辰繫焉.
 The Heaven is blue and placed above. It is light, blue and extremely high. The sun, moon and the stars are hanging in there.
 . 地: 地者在下, 而博厚山川, 萬物皆載焉.
 The Earth is below and nourishes mountains and streams generally. The ten thousands of things(all sorts of things) is all carried by it.
 . 日: 日者, 太陽之精, 朝出于扶桑, 暮入于若木, 冬則短, 夏則長
 The Sun is the essential of great Yang. At morning it is came from Fusuang <ref> Fushang(扶桑): The tree from Shanhaijing(山海經). <海外東經>: 下有湯谷。湯谷上有扶桑，十日所浴，在黑齒北。居水中，有大木，九日居下枝，一日居上枝。 </ref>, and at night, it goes back to Ruomu. <ref> Ruomu(若木): The tree from Shanhaijing(山海經). <海內經>: 南海之內，黑水、青水之間，有木名曰若木，若水出焉。</ref> If (it is) winter, (the sun is) short, and if (it is) summer, (the sun is) long.
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 . 月: 月者, 太陰之精, 遇夜而明, 望前漸圓, 望後漸缺.
 The Moon is the essential of Great Yin. Encountering the night and it becomes light. Before the fifteenth day, it gradually becomes full moon. After the fifteenth day, it is lacking smaller.
 . 星辰: 星辰者, 萬物之精, 上爲星辰, 晝隱夜現
 The Stars are the essential of all kinds of things. Going up and becoming the stars, in daytime it hides and at night it appears.

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 . Stars: The essence of a ten thousand things ascends and becomes stars. They hide during the day and appear at night.
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+===Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae===
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