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2021년 5월 10일 (월) 15:12에 Jangseogak님의 편집

2021-05-10T15:12:38Z

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Jangseogak: 문서 내용을 "=='''Original Script'''=="으로 바꿈

2021-05-09T22:56:08Z

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Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

2018-07-01T19:54:29Z

‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

2018-07-01T19:49:39Z

‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

2018-07-01T19:47:18Z

‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

2018-07-01T19:38:56Z

‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Jangseogak: /* Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari */

2018-07-01T19:13:30Z

‎Student 2 : Younès M'Ghari

Youngoh64: /* Student 4 : (Write your name) */

2017-08-01T06:07:42Z

‎Student 4 : (Write your name)

Youngoh64: /* Student 14 : (Write your name) */

2017-08-01T06:06:32Z

‎Student 14 : (Write your name)

2017년 7월 20일 (목) 08:25에 Sayia817님의 편집

2017-07-20T08:25:34Z

@@ 76번째 줄: / 76번째 줄: @@
 . 秋: 夏盡秋來凉風至霜露降草木黃落百穀用成農人收穫
-When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred flowers '''get consumed, farmers harvest.
+When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred flowers get consumed, farmers harvest.
 '''Edit''': When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred grains are prepared to be used, farmers harvest.

@@ 62번째 줄: / 62번째 줄: @@
 . 春: 春之爲時也日暖風和草木化生百花爭發農夫耕田
-Spring as a season, the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers<sup>1</sup> blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
+Spring as a season, the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
-'''Edit''': Spring as a season, is when the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers<sup>1</sup> blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
+'''Edit''': Spring as a season, is when the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
@@ 76번째 줄: / 76번째 줄: @@
 . 秋: 夏盡秋來凉風至霜露降草木黃落百穀用成農人收穫
-When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred flowers '''get consumed {%%completes enough [amount] to be consumed%%}''', farmers harvest.
+When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred flowers '''get consumed, farmers harvest.
-'''Edit''': When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred grains are prepared, farmers harvest.
+'''Edit''': When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred grains are prepared to be used, farmers harvest.
 ===Student 3 : Petra Sváková===

@@ 78번째 줄: / 78번째 줄: @@
 When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred flowers '''get consumed {%%completes enough [amount] to be consumed%%}''', farmers harvest.
-'''Edit''': When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred grains [[get consumed/completes enough (amount) to be consumed]], farmers harvest.
+'''Edit''': When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred grains are prepared, farmers harvest.
 ===Student 3 : Petra Sváková===

@@ 50번째 줄: / 50번째 줄: @@
 The Yin and the Yang oppose each other and become one, the sound of the thunder moves like the power of the emperor of the heaven.
-'''Edit''': The Yin and the Yang clash each other and become thunder, [its] sound moves like the power of the emperor of the heaven.
+'''Edit''': When the Yin and the Yang clash each other and become thunder, [its] sound moves like the power of the emperor of the heaven.
@@ 62번째 줄: / 62번째 줄: @@
 . 春: 春之爲時也日暖風和草木化生百花爭發農夫耕田
-Spring as a season, '''{^is when^}''' the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers<sup>1</sup> blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
+Spring as a season, the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers<sup>1</sup> blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
 . 夏: 夏之爲時也日永風薰草木長茂農人耘秄
-Summer as a season, '''{^is when^}''' the sun lasts '''{^long^}''' and the wind warms, grass and trees grow and become luxuriant, farmers weed and hoe.
+Summer as a season, is when the sun lasts and the wind warms, grass and trees grow and become luxuriant, farmers weed and hoe.
 . 秋: 夏盡秋來凉風至霜露降草木黃落百穀用成農人收穫
-When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred '''flowers<sup>2</sup> {%%grains%%}''' '''get consumed {%%completes enough [amount] to be consumed%%}''', farmers harvest.
+When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred flowers '''get consumed {%%completes enough [amount] to be consumed%%}''', farmers harvest.
-<sup>1</sup>: "all the flowers"
+'''Edit''': When summer ends and autumn comes, the cold wind arrives and frost and dew set down, grass and trees fade into yellow, a hundred grains [[get consumed/completes enough (amount) to be consumed]], farmers harvest.
 ===Student 3 : Petra Sváková===

@@ 48번째 줄: / 48번째 줄: @@
 . 雷: 陰陽相搏而成雷聲動以爲天皇之威
-The Yin and the Yang '''oppose {%%clash%%}''' each other and become '''one {%%thunder%%}''', the sound of the thunder moves '''as {%%like%%}''' the power of the emperor of the heaven.
+The Yin and the Yang oppose each other and become one, the sound of the thunder moves like the power of the emperor of the heaven.
 . 霜: 秋冬之間天氣上昇地氣下降霜乃降肅殺萬物使草木黃落.
-Between autumn and winter, the Qi of heaven rises up, the Qi of the earth falls down; '''when the frost falls (down) {%%then the frost comes down%%}''', it '''wipes out {00 or literally "freeze them to death"}''' ten thousand things<sup>1</sup> and makes grass and trees fade into yellow.
+Between autumn and winter, the Qi of heaven rises up, the Qi of the earth falls down; when the frost falls (down), it wipes out ten thousand things and makes grass and trees fade into yellow.
 . 春: 春之爲時也日暖風和草木化生百花爭發農夫耕田
-Spring as a season, '''{^is when^}''' the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers<sup>2</sup> blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
+Spring as a season, '''{^is when^}''' the sun is warm and the winds are harmonious, grass and trees change and flourish, hundreds of flowers<sup>1</sup> blossom competitively, farmers plough the fields.
@@ 72번째 줄: / 76번째 줄: @@
-<sup>1</sup>: "all things"
+<sup>1</sup>: "all the flowers"
 ===Student 3 : Petra Sváková===

← 이전 판		2017년 8월 1일 (화) 06:07 판
163번째 줄:		163번째 줄:

	Autumn – [When] summer is exhausted autumn comes, cold wind arrives and frost and dew falls. The grasses and trees yellow and fall, all the grains make up [the] to be used [amount and] the farming people gather and harvest.		Autumn – [When] summer is exhausted autumn comes, cold wind arrives and frost and dew falls. The grasses and trees yellow and fall, all the grains make up [the] to be used [amount and] the farming people gather and harvest.
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−	~~===Student 4 : (Write your name)===~~
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	===Student 5 : (Jae Yong Chang)===		===Student 5 : (Jae Yong Chang)===

← 이전 판		2017년 8월 1일 (화) 06:06 판
363번째 줄:		363번째 줄:

	The Autumn: When the summer is exhausted, the autumn comes. The cold wind arrives and the frost and the dew falls down. The grasses and the trees turn to yellow and fall. All grains are grown ripen, so the farmers harvest(the crop).		The Autumn: When the summer is exhausted, the autumn comes. The cold wind arrives and the frost and the dew falls down. The grasses and the trees turn to yellow and fall. All grains are grown ripen, so the farmers harvest(the crop).
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−	~~===Student 14 : (Write your name)===~~
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@@ 336번째 줄: / 336번째 줄: @@
 . Fall: Summer ends and fall comes. Cool wind arrives and frost and dew fall. Plants and (the leaves of) trees turn yellow and fall. A hundred grains are enough to be used and farmers harvest them.
-===Student 13 : (Write your name)===
+===Student 13 : Ra Yeonjae ===
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 ===Student 14 : (Write your name)===
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