(Translation) 2019 朴赫居世 - 편집 역사

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Obelokon: /* Student Translation : Olga */

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‎Student Translation : Olga

Obelokon: /* Student Translation : Olga */

2019-07-09T14:59:49Z

‎Student Translation : Olga

Obelokon: /* Student Translation : Olga */

2019-07-09T14:58:35Z

‎Student Translation : Olga

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‎Translation

Obelokon: /* Student Translation : Write your name */

2019-07-09T14:57:25Z

‎Student Translation : Write your name

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 ==='''Student Translation : Olga'''===
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-...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village, was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒn [village] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.
+...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village, was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒng [village] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.
 The people of Chin[han] called gourds ''pak''. At the beginning [he was found in/came out of] a big egg similar to gourd. So [they] took Pak as [his] surname. The word for king [in Chinhan language] is ''kǒsǒgan''...
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 . I have added quite a lot of inserts in [] to this texts compared to other translations because I felt that when translated the text does not read clearly. Please, do not hesitate to suggest other ways to translate it with less inserts (they might be a bit to excessive now) or with more neutral ones.<br />
 . One of the inserts I made, Chin[han], particularly interests me. Should we add ''han'' here to clarify which group of people the text is referring to?  <br />
-. Should we call Najǒn a village? Should we just leave a name? Or call it Na village?
+(YO) A couple of translation points:<br />

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	1. I have added quite a lot of inserts in [] to this texts compared to other translations because I felt that when translated the text does not read clearly. Please, do not hesitate to suggest other ways to translate it with less inserts (they might be a bit to excessive now) or with more neutral ones.<br />		1. I have added quite a lot of inserts in [] to this texts compared to other translations because I felt that when translated the text does not read clearly. Please, do not hesitate to suggest other ways to translate it with less inserts (they might be a bit to excessive now) or with more neutral ones.<br />
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	2. One of the inserts I made, Chin[han], particularly interests me. Should we add ''han'' here to clarify which group of people the text is referring to? <br />		2. One of the inserts I made, Chin[han], particularly interests me. Should we add ''han'' here to clarify which group of people the text is referring to? <br />

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 ==='''Student Translation : Olga'''===
 <br />
-...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village, was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒn [village?] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.
+...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village, was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒn [village] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.
 The people of Chin[han] called gourds ''pak''. At the beginning [he was found in/came out of] a big egg similar to gourd. So [they] took Pak as [his] surname. The word for king [in Chinhan language] is ''kǒsǒgan''...
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-. One of the inserts I made, Chin[han], particularly interests me. Should we add ''han'' here to clarify which group of people the text is referring to?
+. One of the inserts I made, Chin[han], particularly interests me. Should we add ''han'' here to clarify which group of people the text is referring to?  <br />
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@@ 31번째 줄: / 31번째 줄: @@
 ==='''Student Translation : Olga'''===
 <br />
 ...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village, was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒn [village?] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.

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-==='''Student Translation : Olga'''===<br />
+==='''Student Translation : Olga'''===
-...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒn [village?] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.
+...Master Sobŏl, chief of Kohǒ village, was looking over the foot of Yangsan mountain. In the forest beside Najǒn [village?] there was a horse [which was] kneeling and neighing. Then [he] went to look [at] it. Suddenly, there was no horse, only a big egg. [He] cut it. A baby came out of it. Then [he] took [the baby] and raised it. [When the baby] reached about 10 years of age, [he] was prodigious and matured early. His birth being mysterious and extraordinary, the people of six villages respected and promoted him. [They] set him as a king there.
 The people of Chin[han] called gourds ''pak''. At the beginning [he was found in/came out of] a big egg similar to gourd. So [they] took Pak as [his] surname. The word for king [in Chinhan language] is ''kǒsǒgan''...

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 {{Primary Source Document3
 |Image = 박혁거세.jpg
-|English = Bak Hyeokgeose
+|English = Pak Hyŏkkŏse
 |Chinese = 朴赫居世
-|Korean = 박혁거세
+|Korean = 박혁거세(''Bak Hyeokgeose'')
 |Genre =
 |Type =

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 |Genre =
 |Type =
-|Author = 金富軾''Kim Busik''
+|Author = 金富軾(''Kim Busik'')
 |Year = 1145
 |Source = 三國史記(''Samguk sagi'')