(Translation) 處容郎 - 편집 역사

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-...王以美女妻之欲留其意, 又賜級干職. 其妻甚羙, 疫神欽慕之變無, 夜至其家竊與之宿. 處容自外至其家見寢有二人, 乃唱歌作舞而退. 歌曰. 東京明期月良, 夜入伊逰行如可, 入良沙寢矣見昆, 脚烏伊四是良羅. 二肹隠吾下扵叱古, 二肹隠誰支下焉古. 本矣吾下是如馬扵隠, 奪叱良乙何如為理古. 時神現形跪扵前曰, “吾羡公之妻今犯之矣. 公不見怒, 感而美之. 誓今已後見畫公之形容, 不入其門矣.” 因此國人門帖處容之形, 以僻邪進慶....
+...王以美女妻之欲留其意, 又賜級干職. 其妻甚羙, 疫神欽慕之變無, 夜至其家竊與之宿. 處容自外至其家見寢有二人, 乃唱歌作舞而退. 歌曰. 東京明期月良, 夜入伊逰行如可, 入良沙寢矣見昆, 脚烏伊四是良羅. 二肹隠吾下扵叱古, 二肹隠誰支下焉古. 本矣吾下是 如馬扵隠, 奪叱良乙何如為理古. 時神現形跪扵前曰, “吾羡公之妻今犯之矣. 公不見怒, 感而美之. 誓今已後見畫公之形容, 不入其門矣.” 因此國人門帖處容之形, 以僻邪進慶.... 《三國遺事. 第二. 紀異》
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-|Translator = [[2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop (Intermediate)#Participants | Participants of 2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop (Intermediate Training Group)]]
+|Translator = [[2018 Summer Hanmun Workshop (Intermediate)#Participants | Participants of 2018 Summer Hanmun Workshop (Intermediate Training Group)]]
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 |Translation Year = 2018
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 =='''Original Script'''==
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 寢矣: chari < bed + phon. 矣 <br/>
 見昆: pk + kon 昆 < look + conjunctive with topic particle  <br/>
-脚烏伊: karori < leg + phon. 烏伊 <br/>
+脚烏伊: karo + ri < leg + phon. 烏 + subject particle 伊 <br/>
 四是良羅: nes + irera 是良羅 < four + copulative final <br/>
 二肹隠: tu + vŭr 肹 + ŭn 隠 < two + phon. + topic particle <br/>

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 ''[What was] originally mine—how have they been snatched away?''<br />
-At that moment, the god revealed himself, and kneeling before [Ch'ŏyong] said, "I envied Sir of his wife, and now I have violated her—[yet] Sir does not show anger. I am moved and impressed by this. I vow that hereafter, [wherever there is] a picture in Sir's likeness, I will not enter the gate" Thus, people of that country pasted likenesses of Ch'ŏyong on their doors, avoiding evil and advancing the joyous.
+At that moment, the god revealed himself, and kneeling before [Ch'ŏyong] said, "I envied Sir of his wife, and now I have violated her—[yet] Sir does not show anger. I am moved and impressed by this. I vow that hereafter, [wherever there is] a picture in Sir's likeness, I will not enter the gate" Thus, people of that country pasted likenesses of Ch'ŏyong on their doors, avoiding evil and advancing the joyous.<br/>
 *Discussion Questions:

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 #I had some trouble recalling the relationships made between terms in the song by the Korean particles, so might be pretty far off the mark here. Any recommendations?
 (JG) I think you did pretty well. I only noted it all as past tense ("in the night I went wandering..."), but your version looks great :)<br />
-(YO) Here is a rough parsing with grammatical details. This is just to show you the structure of this ''hyangga'' 鄉歌 (local song). Below, "phon." means a phonetic additive to indicate that the given word is read in the native tongue. <br/>
+(YO) The last line of the poem ([What was] originally mine—how have they been snatched away?) should be ''[What was] originally mine—now that they have been snatched away, what do I do?'' <br/>
 明期: pal + ki 期 < bright + adnominal particle <br/>
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 奪叱良乙: a + sa + nal 良乙 < take away + phon. 叱 + subjunctive particle <br/>
 為理古: ha + rigo 理古 < do + interrogative final <br/>
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