(Translation) 烈婦入江 - 편집 역사

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Jelenagledic: /* Student Translation : Petra Sváková */

2018-07-16T12:21:59Z

‎Student Translation : Petra Sváková

Kyrie: /* Student Translation : Petra Sváková */

2018-07-15T13:04:09Z

‎Student Translation : Petra Sváková

Kyrie: /* Student Translation : Petra Sváková */

2018-07-15T12:56:07Z

‎Student Translation : Petra Sváková

Thpepe: /* Student Translation : Petra Sváková */

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‎Student Translation : Petra Sváková

Chof: /* Student Translation : Petra Sváková */

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‎Student Translation : Petra Sváková

Thpepe: /* Student Translation : Petra Sváková */

2018-07-10T13:57:10Z

‎Student Translation : Petra Sváková

Thpepe: /* Student Translation : (Write your name) */

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+|Translator = [[2018 Summer Hanmun Workshop (Intermediate)#Participants | Participants of 2018 Summer Hanmun Workshop (Intermediate Training Group)]]
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 |Translation Year = 2018
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 =='''Original Script'''==
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+[[Category:2018 Summer Hanmun Workshop]]
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 A devoted wife enters the river
-The devoted wife, a person of Kyŏngsan, was chinsa<sup>1</sup> Pae Jungsŏn's daughter. She had already passed the age of 15<sup>2</sup> and got married to I Donggyu of a literati family. She was good at managing internal matters. In the Kyŏngshin year of Hongmu's reign<sup>3</sup> Japanese pirates were oppressing Kyŏngsan. They surrounded the place and caused troubles. [There was] nobody who would dare to resist. Donggyu, at the time, went to Happ'o to commander's headquarters [but] did not come back. The bandits' cavalry suddenly entered the town [where] the devoted wife was living. The devoted wife embraced a baby she was breastfeeding and ran away. The bandits chased after her until the river. The river water was just then increasing. The devoted wife figured that she could not escape. She put the baby down on the riverbank and running entered the river. The bandits drew [their] bows and with all strength directed arrows, targeted her and said: "You, come [here], if not you will die." The devoted wife turned around and looked at the bandits, [while] scolding [them] she said: "Why don't you kill me quickly? How could I be blemished by [those who are] the bandits?" The bandits shot the arrows and hit [her] shoulder. They shot again and hit [her] again. Thereupon she died inside the river. Ch'eboksa<sup>4</sup> Chojun sent the matter up and a banner was displayed at the gate of the town.
+The devoted wife, a person of Kyŏngsan, was chinsa<sup>1</sup> Pae Jungsŏn's daughter. She had already passed the age of 15<sup>2</sup> and got married to I Donggyu of a literati family. She was good at managing internal matters. In the Kyŏngshin year of Hongmu's reign<sup>3</sup> Japanese pirates were oppressing Kyŏngsan. They surrounded the place and caused troubles. [There was] nobody who would dare to resist. Donggyu, at the time, went to Happ'o to commander's headquarters [but] did not come back. The bandits' cavalry suddenly entered the town [where] the devoted wife was living. The devoted wife embraced a baby she was breastfeeding and ran away. The bandits chased after her until the river. The river water was just then increasing. The devoted wife figured that she could not escape. She put the baby down on the riverbank and running entered the river. The bandits drew [their] bows and with all strength directed arrows, targeted her and said: "You, come [here], if not you will die." The devoted wife turned around and looked at the bandits, [while] scolding [them] she said: "Why don't you kill me quickly? How could I be blemished by [those who are] the bandits?" The bandits shot the arrows and hit [her] shoulder. They shot again and hit [her] again. Thereupon she died inside the river. Ch'eboksa<sup>4</sup> Cho Chun sent the matter up and a banner was displayed at the gate of the town.
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 <sup>2</sup> 笄 - a large pin for holding hair, girls began to wear this pin when they were at the age of 15.
-<sup>3</sup> 洪武庚申 - should mean the 57th year of the emperor Hongmu(ch. Hongwu)'s reign(1368 - 1398). However, this is a year of the reign of his son Yǒngnak (ch. Yongle; 1402 - 1424) who usurped the throne from his nephew and dated the first year of his reign as the '35th year of Hogmu's reign (洪武三十五年)'. Thus 洪武庚申 is 1424.
+<sup>3</sup> 洪武庚申 - should mean the 57th year of the emperor Hongmu(ch. Hongwu)'s reign(1368 - 1398). However, this is a year of the reign of his son Yǒngnak (ch. Yongle; 1402 - 1424) who usurped the throne from his nephew and dated the first year of his reign as the '35th year of Hogmu's reign (洪武三十五年)'. Thus 洪武庚申 is 1424.<br />
 <sup>4</sup> 體覆使 - an official who received an order from the king and had to go to provinces to investigate crimes connected to the military affairs.
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 (Kyrie) I see your point about the repetition of "devoted" before wife, but I think that the "devoted" is part of her identity and therefore it is alright to repeat it. She is not just any wife. The story wants to stress that she is a ''devoted'' wife and it is for her ''devotion'' that she receives the gate.
-Here 乳子 is translated as a verb and object "a baby she was breastfeeding." This sounds like the devoted wife was in the middle of breastfeeding her baby when the bandits arrived. However, I understood it more as a compound noun meaning a newborn infant who was still at the breastfeeding stage. My suggestion would be to translate it as "The devoted wife embraced her newborn baby/infant and ran away."
+Here 乳子 is translated as a verb and object "a baby she was breastfeeding." This sounds like the devoted wife was in the middle of breastfeeding her baby when the bandits arrived. However, I understood it more as a compound noun meaning a newborn infant who was still at the breastfeeding stage. My suggestion would be to translate it as "The devoted wife embraced her newborn baby/infant and ran away." (YO) I take Kyrie's points.
-(JG) Regarding Petra's question, I translated the whole phrase as broken-spirited.
+(JG) Regarding Petra's question, I translated the whole phrase as broken-spirited.<br />
 [[Category:2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop]]
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 (Kyrie) I see your point about the repetition of "devoted" before wife, but I think that the "devoted" is part of her identity and therefore it is alright to repeat it. She is not just any wife. The story wants to stress that she is a ''devoted'' wife and it is for her ''devotion'' that she receives the gate.
 Here 乳子 is translated as a verb and object "a baby she was breastfeeding." This sounds like the devoted wife was in the middle of breastfeeding her baby when the bandits arrived. However, I understood it more as a compound noun meaning a newborn infant who was still at the breastfeeding stage. My suggestion would be to translate it as "The devoted wife embraced her newborn baby/infant and ran away."
 [[Category:2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop]]
 [[Category:Intermediate Training Group]]

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 (Fran): The repetition of the phrase "the devoted wife" sounds a bit stilted. I wonder if the modifier "devoted" can be dropped after the first mention. It should be "The bandits ''drew'' their bows" to maintain consistent tense.
 (Kyrie) I see your point about the repetition of "devoted" before wife, but I think that the "devoted" is part of her identity and therefore it is alright to repeat it. She is not just any wife. The story wants to stress that she is a ''devoted'' wife and it is for her ''devotion'' that she receives the gate.
 [[Category:2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop]]
 [[Category:Intermediate Training Group]]

@@ 64번째 줄: / 64번째 줄: @@
 (Fran): The repetition of the phrase "the devoted wife" sounds a bit stilted. I wonder if the modifier "devoted" can be dropped after the first mention. It should be "The bandits ''drew'' their bows" to maintain consistent tense.
 [[Category:2018 Hanmun Summer Workshop]]
 [[Category:Intermediate Training Group]]

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