https://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&feed=atom&action=historyGGHS 한혜○ - 편집 역사2024-03-29T07:11:40Z이 문서의 편집 역사MediaWiki 1.23.13https://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=81239&oldid=prev2019년 1월 16일 (수) 12:23에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집2019-01-16T12:23:42Z<p></p>
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</table>Lyndseyhttps://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=80673&oldid=prevLyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 GGHS 한혜원 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 GGHS 한혜○ 문서로 옮겼습니다2019-01-09T01:47:05Z<p>Lyndsey 사용자가 <a href="/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%EC%9B%90&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="GGHS 한혜원 (없는 문서)">GGHS 한혜원</a> 문서를 넘겨주기를 만들지 않고 <a href="/Edu/wiki/index.php/GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B" title="GGHS 한혜○">GGHS 한혜○</a> 문서로 옮겼습니다</p>
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</table>GGHS 혜원https://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=80556&oldid=prev2019년 1월 8일 (화) 10:37에 대한 GGHS 혜원의 편집2019-01-08T10:37:32Z<p></p>
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</table>GGHS 혜원https://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=80555&oldid=prev2019년 1월 8일 (화) 10:37에 대한 GGHS 혜원의 편집2019-01-08T10:37:14Z<p></p>
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</table>GGHS 혜원https://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=78876&oldid=prev2018년 12월 29일 (토) 02:00에 대한 Lyndsey의 편집2018-12-29T02:00:27Z<p></p>
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</table>Lyndseyhttps://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=78828&oldid=prevLyndsey: Lyndsey 사용자가 2018 GGHS 7 Han Hye Won 문서를 GGHS 한혜원 문서로 옮겼습니다2018-12-28T10:53:00Z<p>Lyndsey 사용자가 <a href="/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=2018_GGHS_7_Han_Hye_Won&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="2018 GGHS 7 Han Hye Won (없는 문서)">2018 GGHS 7 Han Hye Won</a> 문서를 <a href="/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%EC%9B%90&action=edit&redlink=1" class="new" title="GGHS 한혜원 (없는 문서)">GGHS 한혜원</a> 문서로 옮겼습니다</p>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"></td></tr>
<tr><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Our team used education as the keyword at this global issue forum. The main topic is comparison and analysis of university education in Goryeo and university education in modern Korea. I was in charge of investigating the modern college education system. I analyzed the adventages and disadventages of the modern education system by analyzing the news and charts of Wikipedia and newspapers. and I translated korean into English, The materials on the Gukjagam, the national science of Goryeo, and the munheongongdo, the private educational institution of Goryeo.</div></td><td class='diff-marker'> </td><td style="background-color: #f9f9f9; color: #333333; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #e6e6e6; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Our team used education as the keyword at this global issue forum. The main topic is comparison and analysis of university education in Goryeo and university education in modern Korea. I was in charge of investigating the modern college education system. I analyzed the adventages and disadventages of the modern education system by analyzing the news and charts of Wikipedia and newspapers. and I translated korean into English, The materials on the Gukjagam, the national science of Goryeo, and the munheongongdo, the private educational institution of Goryeo.</div></td></tr>
</table>Lyndseyhttps://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=76527&oldid=prev7 hyewon: /* Essay */2018-07-26T08:15:24Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Essay</span></span></p>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div><del class="diffchange diffchange-inline"> </del>I didn't know I'd have to edit the wiki until I did this activity. Although there were ups and downs and trials as it was the first time I dealed with it, I could improve my ability to understand and edit under the directions of my teacher. Also, because our team is made up of friends who want to be engaged in education, we could talk about education and I think it would be able to help me a lot in my future. moreover, by introducing our own system, we were able to share our culture as citizens of the world and foster patriotism and love to our culture.  </div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>I didn't know I'd have to edit the wiki until I did this activity. Although there were ups and downs and trials as it was the first time I dealed with it, I could improve my ability to understand and edit under the directions of my teacher. Also, because our team is made up of friends who want to be engaged in education, we could talk about education and I think it would be able to help me a lot in my future. moreover, by introducing our own system, we were able to share our culture as citizens of the world and foster patriotism and love to our culture.  </div></td></tr>
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</table>7 hyewonhttps://dh.aks.ac.kr/Edu/wiki/index.php?title=GGHS_%ED%95%9C%ED%98%9C%E2%97%8B&diff=76525&oldid=prev7 hyewon: /* Essay */2018-07-26T08:15:11Z<p><span dir="auto"><span class="autocomment">Essay</span></span></p>
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<tr><td class='diff-marker'>−</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #ffe49c; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Our team used education as the keyword at this global issue forum. The main topic is comparison and analysis of university education in Goryeo and university education in modern Korea. I was in charge of investigating the modern college education system. I analyzed the adventages and disadventages of the modern education system by analyzing the news and charts of Wikipedia and newspapers. I didn't know I'd have to edit the wiki until I did this activity. Although there were ups and downs and trials as it was the first time I dealed with it, I could improve my ability to understand and edit under the directions of my teacher. Also, because our team is made up of friends who want to be engaged in education, we could talk about education and I think it would be able to help me a lot in my future. moreover, by introducing our own system, we were able to share our culture as citizens of the world and foster patriotism and love to our culture. I also learned that there was a lot of effort from the Goryeo Dynasty to the present education of Korea. Before studying this subject, I was unfamiliar with the education system of Goryeo. Through this activity, however, I thought about how to reform the education system and how students can pursue their dreams.</div></td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>Our team used education as the keyword at this global issue forum. The main topic is comparison and analysis of university education in Goryeo and university education in modern Korea. I was in charge of investigating the modern college education system. I analyzed the adventages and disadventages of the modern education system by analyzing the news and charts of Wikipedia and newspapers. <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">and I translated korean into English, The materials on the Gukjagam, the national science of Goryeo, and the munheongongdo, the private educational institution of Goryeo.</ins></div></td></tr>
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<tr><td colspan="2"> </td><td class='diff-marker'>+</td><td style="color:black; font-size: 88%; border-style: solid; border-width: 1px 1px 1px 4px; border-radius: 0.33em; border-color: #a3d3ff; vertical-align: top; white-space: pre-wrap;"><div>I also learned that there was a lot of effort from the Goryeo Dynasty to the present education of Korea. Before studying this subject, I was unfamiliar with the education system of Goryeo. Through this activity, however, I thought about how to reform the education system and how students can pursue their dreams. <ins class="diffchange diffchange-inline">1000 anniversary of the founding of the Goryeo Dynasty was not celebrated because that year was on the Japanese occupation that suffering many of our people. That is why the 110-year anniversary is so important. Moreover, it was a good experience to celebrate in the ganghwa that flower of the Goryeo Dynasty, which has been the capital of Korea for 39 years.</ins></div></td></tr>
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