"GGHS 고은○"의 두 판 사이의 차이
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I have been thinking a lot about improving my English skills over the past year, and I realized that English is difficult. | I have been thinking a lot about improving my English skills over the past year, and I realized that English is difficult. | ||
I realized that and wondered how to change my mind. | I realized that and wondered how to change my mind. | ||
| − | + | When I heard many people who gradually got used to English abroad, I thought that I should experience it myself. | |
Therefore, I participated in a global camp where I can meet native speakers in person and talk about various things on the same topic. | Therefore, I participated in a global camp where I can meet native speakers in person and talk about various things on the same topic. | ||
| − | + | The topic I have chosen is 'Agraculture/Fishing Industries and Traditional Marketsdlek'. | |
It was a topic that was more interesting because I grew up in Ganghwa and my grandparents were farming themselves. | It was a topic that was more interesting because I grew up in Ganghwa and my grandparents were farming themselves. | ||
| − | + | And I thought that fishing and agriculture were the subject that can looking at the lives of everyone who lived from the past to the present day of Ganghwa, | |
and I thought that there was no topic that could feel the life and vitality of the working class as much as the traditional market. | and I thought that there was no topic that could feel the life and vitality of the working class as much as the traditional market. | ||
| − | + | Within the team I surveyed the mudflats on Ganghwado Island. The teacher told us to introduce our investigation to another foreigner so they would like to come here. So, I looked at the contents that people who did not know anything about Ganghwado Island can have fun and experience. | |
2019년 1월 8일 (화) 17:53 판
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| Student ID | 1학년 1반 1번 |
| Wiki ID | GGHS솔 |
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2019 Winter Personal Essay
I have been thinking a lot about improving my English skills over the past year, and I realized that English is difficult. I realized that and wondered how to change my mind. When I heard many people who gradually got used to English abroad, I thought that I should experience it myself. Therefore, I participated in a global camp where I can meet native speakers in person and talk about various things on the same topic. The topic I have chosen is 'Agraculture/Fishing Industries and Traditional Marketsdlek'. It was a topic that was more interesting because I grew up in Ganghwa and my grandparents were farming themselves. And I thought that fishing and agriculture were the subject that can looking at the lives of everyone who lived from the past to the present day of Ganghwa, and I thought that there was no topic that could feel the life and vitality of the working class as much as the traditional market. Within the team I surveyed the mudflats on Ganghwado Island. The teacher told us to introduce our investigation to another foreigner so they would like to come here. So, I looked at the contents that people who did not know anything about Ganghwado Island can have fun and experience.
